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cloudfactory

 Genre: Indie Rock

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This is a re-worked version of the first song that I recorded back in 06' called "Caught Dead in this..." It needed some work even before I posted it 2 years ago, but I added some real drums and new vox. I personally think it turned out much better. If you get a chance give it a listen and let me know what you think!
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Lyrics
Warm and dry,
quiet like a funeral
please please try
to follow sounds of my voice
wait till I start over
seasons may have stripped away the time
but now I'm older
washed in blood and tears from your eyes

My sail has flown
gripping the wind
and I'm just a traveler...
caught dead in this sin.

I tell myself to hold on tight
anyday now I'm gonna be alright
am I a fool to wait for you
I keep pushing for you to pull me through
a little taste of love is a bitter pill
I can't make it without you
no I never will

warm and dry,
wait till I
warm and dry
please please try

My sail has flown
gripping the wind
and I'm just a traveler...
caught dead in this sin.
Song Stats
Hits: 2751
Comments: 6
Fans: 5
Plays: 42
Downloads: 0
Votes: 3
Uploaded: Sep 06, 2008 - 01:38:05 PM
Last Updated: Sep 06, 2008 - 01:38:05 PM Last Played: Apr 07, 2019 - 12:27:20 AM
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Hardware:
Tele, Seagull Acoustic, Yamaha keys, vintage drums, Marshall mic,
Software:
Cool Edit Pro 2.1, FL Studio 7, Cakewalk home studio, Melodyne Uno.
Comments
pablatone said 3912 days ago (September 6th, 2008)
This is really good
it kind of reminds me of ELO. I like the line "a little taste of love is a bitter pill" . Like a little taste is bad cause it makes you want more? It makes me think. I never heard the original, but this is top shelf. Vocals may be about .5 too low, but that is just my opinion, could be my monitors.
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cloudfactory said 3912 days ago (September 6th, 2008)
Caught Dead in This...
Hi pablatone, thanks for listening. I agree as far as the chorus goes, the vox could be a little louder, however this version is much better than the last just in the vocal performance. I'll take that into consideration before I send it to be mastered. I really don't have good monitors myself I use my Sony headphones and then reference it with some cheap home stereo speakers, ha.
Check out my latest song called Another Way
LunaTrick said 3912 days ago (September 7th, 2008)
Cool Shoegaze...
Nicely produced - like it a lot!
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cloudfactory said 3911 days ago (September 7th, 2008)
Caught Dead in This...
Hi Luna, thanks for listening, you've got some really cool stuff too!
Check out my latest song called Another Way
Lennon714 said 3910 days ago (September 8th, 2008)
This
is a big improvement from the original. Not that the original was anything to scoff at. I'm glad you reworked this one. It's got a great swagger to it.
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cloudfactory said 3910 days ago (September 8th, 2008)
Caught Dead in This...
Thanks guys!
Check out my latest song called Another Way
Char said 3910 days ago (September 8th, 2008)
Caught Dead In This
Yes, This is better. But, that last version was great, already. you are one of my favorites. I have good taste.
Thanks so much.
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cloudfactory said 3910 days ago (September 8th, 2008)
Caught Dead in This...
Hi Char, once again...thanks for the support! As long as people are enjoying, I'm enjoying it!
Check out my latest song called Another Way
cjdaley said 3910 days ago (September 8th, 2008)
Nice tune
and good production to my ears.
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cloudfactory said 3910 days ago (September 8th, 2008)
Caught Dead in This...
Thanks CJdaley,
the production/engineering is probably one of smy fav parts to song writing!
Check out my latest song called Another Way
kassia said 3772 days ago (January 25th, 2009)
caught dead
another great offering from you. i really like your vocals on this one - you used some really cool effects. great guitars and drums. the hand clap sounds really added to the overall atmosphere of the piece. cool stuff. glad i stumbled upon you this evening!
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Name: Brenton Little
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