ho HUM (dark)

legato

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My first attempt at vocals in a very long time. I know this song is sort of gray and depressing. It is written in a very dark time in my life. No one ever, has to be alone if you have family. I pray for change...

I didn't know what genre because the lyrics are so dark, so I put it under "other". All feedback is welcome, especially for the vocals-I would greatly appreciate it.

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Lyrics

This life of mine
is nothing but a lie...

ho ho hum

I sit here alone, by myself writing this song about nothing and nothing at all because it makes no sense It really doesn't make any sense why I go day to day living alone by myself...

Chorus:

There is no one (nothing at all)
There is nothing (No one to see)
to make me want to stay here... (Nothing to do)

ho ho hum
ho ho hum

jam

chorus:

Song Stats

Hits: 3857
Comments: 14
Fans: 4
Plays: 325
Downloads: 142
Votes: 14
Uploaded: Nov 11, 2004 - 08:14:38 AM
Last Updated: Nov 08, 2004 - 11:27:02 PM Last Played: Jan 08, 2018 - 10:53:45 PM

Song License

Creative Commons License:
Attribution-NoDerivs-NonCommercial

Song Actions

Hardware:

Triton for all organs and guitars. Mackie 1492-VLZ line mixer. AKG mic. all layered vocals by me. Mac G4 Laptop

Software:

Garage Band

Comments

MissChaos	MissChaos said 4913 days ago (November 11th, 2004)
	mmm, me likey. This really reminds me of Porcupine Tree (one of my fav bands at the moment). I love the effected vocals and your voice is perfectly tuned. I love the chorus vocals that repeat "Nothing at all...". And those lyrics really strike a proverbial chord with me. Very, very well done. Miss Chaos Check out my latest song called Transmission

legato	legato said 4913 days ago (November 11th, 2004)
	mmm, me likey. Thanks for the comment! I asked myself what is porcupine tree, so I checked out their website and listen to one of their songs. What a bizarre coincidence...they had some of the same tones with their choices of instruments. Weird though. Anyway thanks for listening! --- patrick Check out my latest song called The Hour - Knossos (Live Practice)

SlimGirlFat

SlimGirlFat said 4913 days ago (November 11th, 2004)

Great track.

Your vocals sound good and great harmonies. Nice effects
used throughout.
The only thing I can notice ( through my headphones) is
that the "telephone voice" is panned very far to the right
and doesn't seem balanced.
Other than that, as grey and dark as you think this is,
it is only a reflection of a moment in time..

I'll come and give you a hug!

SlimGirlFat

Check out my latest song called Waiting For You 'Feat' David Paul Newell & Slimmie

legato

legato said 4913 days ago (November 11th, 2004)

Great track.
Thanks slimmie for your input. I think I wanted to add more emphasis by
creating a gray cold tone on the radio voice when I wrote this piece. Listening
to it so many times you loose sight on balancing the piece. I'll keep that in
mind next time.

You're right though... it is a moment in time. Thanks for the hug!

---
patrick

Check out my latest song called The Hour - Knossos (Live Practice)

Suzanne	Suzanne said 4913 days ago (November 11th, 2004)
	moody blues dreamy i like the george harrison feel to this tune. and i like the photo too. really nice. dreamy and sweet and sad and pop lyrical. very nice song and arrangement. Check out my latest song called Rock The Baby With Voodoo (w/Tobin)

legato	legato said 4913 days ago (November 11th, 2004)
	moody blues dreamy Thanks for your comment Suzanne. I glad to hear some of the influences that I have grown up with, in the pieces I write. --- patrick Check out my latest song called The Hour - Knossos (Live Practice)

Z293	Z293 said 4913 days ago (November 11th, 2004)
	Great Vocals If that's what you sound like after a long time, I can only imagine what you will sound like on your next song. Check out my latest song called La Pavillon

legato	legato said 4912 days ago (November 12th, 2004)
	Great Vocals Thanks Z I appreciate it. Hopefully the next song won't be as depressing lyric wise :) --- patrick Check out my latest song called The Hour - Knossos (Live Practice)

TobinMueller	TobinMueller said 4913 days ago (November 12th, 2004)
	Excellent lyrical pop and textures Those "ho ho hums"s are so great! What a wonderful piece. Wow. I just love the gently surprising chord progression, the floating nature of the textures, the great backing vocals, the full and complete arrangement. Excellent song. Check out my latest song called Momentary Undertow

_nderscore	_nderscore said 4912 days ago (November 12th, 2004)
	gloomy glooms starts rather abruptly, but what a rich song-there is so much here to like. your vocals remind me of peter murphy in places. excellent harmonies & overall 'mood'. love the lyrics Check out my latest song called glyd

thetiler	thetiler said 4865 days ago (December 29th, 2004)
	music Being able to play with this type of melodic content SHOULD give you something to really hang your hat onto! Your going up way up in the vote as far as my submit. thetiler Check out my latest song called They Went Underground

thetiler	thetiler said 4865 days ago (December 29th, 2004)
	Great picture as well I forgot to say that that picture really stuck out as for as many of the ones i've seen here. Nice. thetiler Check out my latest song called They Went Underground

Mystified	Mystified said 4799 days ago (March 6th, 2005)
	Wow What a great song. Yes...sad...and then again, that you have made something beautiful like this out of a sad point of time is the irony. Vocals are excellent. I'd love to hear you do some more singing in future songs. Thank you so much. Check out my latest song called Child of Yesterday

Cori Ander	Cori Ander said 4060 days ago (March 15th, 2007)
	Nice Nice nice .. realy nifty song. PS I found my way here by the help of Nyakki's MacJams Random Song Picker: http://www.trimira.com/macjams_random.html Check out my latest song called O store Gud

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Born and raised in California by two wonderful parents. Both Mom and Dad were very musical. And as far as I can remember, there has been music being played at home all the time. I started music in 6th grade playing the trombone, and ended up playi... [see more]

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