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This is a 2 min song that could use something. But I found it a neat song for some reason. It just goes to show you that I cant finish a song. I just keep writing short bits. But at least Im still writing. If I could just find an idea for either the middle and or the end. Ill call this one...Its Not My Fault #1
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Lyrics
Its not my fault,I didnt vote for that guy. Cant blame me..I didnt set it on fire.
Dont look at me...Im really not the man.
Its not my fault.. I didnt yell out the answer.
Its not my fault.. I didnt steal that land.
Dont yell at me.. I didnt write the plan
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Comments: 10
Fans: 10
Plays: 105
Downloads: 115

Uploaded: Oct 24, 2008 - 07:56:51 PM
Last Updated: Oct 24, 2008 - 07:56:51 PM Last Played: May 24, 2018 - 05:47:47 PM
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Hardware:
Guitar , Bass, and drums
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Logic E
Comments
peacepiano said 3525 days ago (October 24th, 2008)
Mainstream
Hmmm.... This is more mainstream than your usual ideas. Nice hook to it. I hear the need for something else, but not sure what to add. I'll keep listening. You keep writing, okay?

Bill
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musichead said 3523 days ago (October 26th, 2008)
well
Well ... I will keep writing. I did have a different ending for this song. I had the chords going to Dm with finger picking, Then to a Cmaj for a more funky feel..But to me . it just didnt work. Im going to try and and add something to this. But if you have any ideas for background keys...let me know.

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guygrooves said 3525 days ago (October 24th, 2008)
Huge
potential in them thar hills. Keep writing i am excited to see what comes of it.
Peace
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musichead said 3523 days ago (October 26th, 2008)
I have.....
I have 1000's for tunes in my head...The hard part is finding that catchy one...Thanks for stop by and listen....

Steve
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regulus said 3525 days ago (October 24th, 2008)
That your having
fun is the only thing valued. To stretch it out remember the great philosophy of Fred Murray, who did "I'm Henry the Eighth I Am" and to quote "Second verse same as the first", "I'm Henry the Eighth I Am"

Cross over the bridge for a verse and you three minutes.

Way to do steve.......... don't stop, keep on a rock'en
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musichead said 3523 days ago (October 26th, 2008)
I believe
I believe In simple. I seem to follow the "Less is more school".
Thanks for the idea and listen....

Steve


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michael2 said 3525 days ago (October 24th, 2008)
nice one
i really liked this, kind of reminds me of the Talking Heads. I don't think that you necessarily need a bridge or a change. If I had recorded this, I probably would have just let that groove keep going at the end, with a vocal vamp and maybe something like a cheesy organ sound or a small horn section coming in doing a simple melody. don't stop working on this one, it's really cool.
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musichead said 3523 days ago (October 26th, 2008)
I like...
I like your idea and the heavier bass idea. I did try some real cheesy keys at the end. I just rushed this one out. But at least Ive received some very good ideas.
Thanks for the listen and stop by!!!

Steve
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Moviz said 3524 days ago (October 25th, 2008)
Nice and
catchy with nice guitar riffs too. Try going into minor key or major 7ths for the bridge; you got this far and it's very listenable, so you'll get over this block you say you're having, cheers M
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Moviz said 3524 days ago (October 25th, 2008)
maybe
a heavier bass line would sound good too, M
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musichead said 3523 days ago (October 26th, 2008)
I agree...
It does need a heavier bass. Im not really having a block as much as a time issue. I just want to get the songs out. I have ADD. haha
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lavalamp said 3523 days ago (October 26th, 2008)
There's a lot.....
...of good things here on this song. Guitar sounds great. I don't know what's missing. Maybe some drum fills would fill this out.

Cool stuff

Dave
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musichead said 3519 days ago (October 30th, 2008)
Im going...
Im going to to add up all these advices and use them...Infact Ive already started.
Thanks for stopping in!!!

Steve
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VicDiesel said 3522 days ago (October 27th, 2008)
Hey, I'm not even allowed to vote!
Cool song.

Less echo on your voice? You have a good voice, so no need to smother it like that.


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musichead said 3519 days ago (October 30th, 2008)
Me ?
I havnt found my studio voice yet.. I feel I do ok live. But I do admit its getting better. But thanks for the nice review on my voice. I boost now and then sure does help. Thanks again!!


Steve
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elfdaughter said 3521 days ago (October 28th, 2008)
....
Reminds me of 'we didn't start the fire'. Really nice guitar work. This has definately got potential!
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musichead said 3519 days ago (October 30th, 2008)
thank you
hmm Billy Joel.... I see that. Good pick. Thanks for the stop over. Ill be working on a better version soon!!!


Steve
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guitapick said 3518 days ago (October 31st, 2008)
Oh...
...and exactly who's fault IS it, then? MINE!!??

I like this a lot. If (and only if) you're looking for feedback on a middle part:

What about an instrumental, same riff as the bed up a third with solos and "it's not my fault" clips (different people, word emphasis) coming in and out, in the background, during that section?

Just a thought. Regardless: cool stuff
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dajama said 3516 days ago (November 2nd, 2008)
Cool
This is very cool. I think it has a nice groove, and while I know what you mean about a change, I don't think it necessarily needs one. You could of course have a big, out of left field kind of change, and have some totally different instrumental colors kick in, though. I like the cheesy keyboards idea, or how about distorted guitar? Either way, the main thing is that this is a good song, and that's what it's all about! Nicely done. Peace.
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