MacJams.com - Song: A Story(Drama) by Feter

davisamerica said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)

right then ...
Well you have made me drop my jaw to the floor. Let me pick it up and see if I can tell you what my ears and heart were honored to hear Feter. The mad organ drew me in initially. Would be very interested to know your recording approach for this huge work. I have listened once thru and now on second following more closely with the description. You have poured out a reflective and moving picture indeed. The recording itself is very nice Feter ... it sonically really works well on monitors here. The strings are very well placed and sound great. The wonderful classical feel to this is really sweet to the ears. My Brother, my Brother .... amazing my friend !

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Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx alot Bro , I m totally grateful for your time and kind comments here .the honor is mine to hear such words from a real talented musician like you ..I know my music is singing songs ..emotions.. so happy you like it ...! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

davisamerica	davisamerica said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
	btw ..... downloaded Check out my latest song called ok char2(Vic and Flatrock mix)

Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
	.. with pleasure !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

Cameron

Cameron said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)

Nice blending
of strings and brass. This music has sort of a dark, Russian flavor.

I like your use of brief silences in Part 1, the rather free rhythm in Part 2, the use of organ in Part 3, and your treatment of strings in Part 4.

I can hear your pain in this music, yet there are definitely glimmers of hope shining through even in the minor mode. This is especially true in Part 4.

So what I'm getting from this is that you have suffered, yet want to move on to a more positive time in your life. You are making this happen!

It's good that you express yourself in this way, and to share it with us.

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Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot Sir , to read your comments and efforts to analyze these simple pieces made me so happy meant so much to me ...so thankful ! I know ...I m tired of hope but it seems the only thing left ... peace ! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

ramonaji	ramonaji said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
	Quite a piece! Very heartfelt piece, Feter! Check out my latest song called Trump's America

Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
	Peace ! Thnx alot Ramona , so happy you enjoyed this drama ! peace !!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

Bowman

Bowman said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)

This is overwhelming Feter.
I feel like I've traveled back through the past and experienced so much of your heartfelt story - and this is one from the heart.
No words are needed to express your deep feelings here.
It's a wonderful composition filled with pain and filled with love.
Thank you for sharing so much of yourself so truthfully my friend.
Charlie

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Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx a lot Charlie , I m so pleased to see you enjoyed this and felt what I wanted to say ...always meant so much to me those kind comments ...! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

Char

Char said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)

Very dark and bleak.
Lost and alone. A long, never ending journey without a final destination. Not wanting to trust or to hope but there is too much pain without those. Giving up control when you have no control. Sometimes, it is the only way to breathe.
It might be because of the organ but this sounded like a prayer. It has been said that when we sing, we pray twice. Maybe, when we play music that comes from our soul God is there guiding our hands and sharing His wisdom. Thank you.

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Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
	Peace !! Thnx alot Char , so glad you enjoyed this Drama ...I know I do pray and always try to gain peace out of them ! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

sloparts

sloparts said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)

Dear Feter
Out of the depths of your soul comes a spirit into the light.

Throughout the history of mankind, music has been the salve that has soothed the wounds done to the spirit. Music has a cleansing effect on the soul, especially when you use it to help release the trials and tribulations of life into the world and set it free from your soul.

This music is clearly meant to do that, and it succeeds beyond your wildest imagination my friend.

Bravo Feter at last you are free.

Ed

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Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx alot Sir ,I really appreciate all these words came from a true musician with all the wisdom to hear from and I m so honor to have those from you ...really kind of you ! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

scaustrita	scaustrita said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
	Nice change I admire artist that cross over to any Genre they feel! Music is emotion, and our moods change. I felt I had my black tie and coat, fixated on the orchestra. We call those parts movements, and the are moving my emotions. The nowhereman took me somewhere man! Check out my latest song called Sunset Pier

Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot my friend, I m so happy this meant something for you .. and speaks to you ..cos our music is our language to express our feelings between us ...real kind of you to drop by and give this a listen ..meant alot !!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

magnatone

magnatone said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)

A Story
Feter - what a huge work! There's so much to this, i'm hearing more and more, in my second time through. thanks for all of the words that go with this different parts, although the feelings come powerfully through with or without the words. i so admire a musician that can write in a completely different realm than their usual, and so successfully! Great job!

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Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx a lot Karen , to read your comments really fills my heart of appreciation for your kind words ...meant so much cos I really admire your talent ! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

Roxylee	Roxylee said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
	I can feel it all You express all the pain and longing here, a mixture of despair and hope. Listening with headphones on, the music in the middle of my head. Wonderful, my dear friend.:-) Check out my latest song called Emma, by davisamerica

Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot Dear , glad you enjoyed this Drama ..which you know part of it , really appreciated your kind words !!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

sonnyjim	sonnyjim said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
	Wow Very rich (I hear that Russian vein Cameron mentioned). Not at all what I expected to hear! Downloaded for closer listening..... Check out my latest song called A Bell In The Valley

Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx alot my friend , I really appreciate your kind comments I just dunno about russian I thought more german but its just an old renaissance inside me ...glad you like it ! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

ShadowofNine	ShadowofNine said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
	Lovely Piece of music, the definition is grand, well composed, and simply Charming....Bravo Check out my latest song called Alone

Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot my friend , those words meant alot ..really appreciated !!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

Sigmund	Sigmund said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
	story your music tells a sad yet inspirational story of pain, perseverence and hope. Great work Feter - thank you for bringing this to mj! Check out my latest song called Running with the Wind by Peter B, feat rok41

Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx alot my friend , seeing you enjoyed it and had this expressing from it made me so happy and sure lot of appreciation for your words. peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

SISTERS

SISTERS said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)

amen!
the horns and strings make a majestic opening in part one
those strings nearly saw my heart apart in part two
part three calmer, more resigned to what you can and can't stop - nice bass work on the organ.
four hits us with a powerful wash of serious strings.
what a cool combination of writing from your heart, from your strife,
and creating and arranging the sounds to say them.
big vote from this sistah

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Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! O Sista you know how I got so happy reading your words and knwo that you enjoyed this work ...thank you so very much you so kind !!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

Doug Somers

Doug Somers said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)

You have turned emotion into sound
and sound into emotion. The connection you create in your music sings to us so truly of who you are so we can know you that much better, and in so doing see ourselves through you and your music.

It's a wondrous thing to share Feter, and we are all the better for it. We have been blessed in so many ways: through the many comments you have made over the years, the strong sense of enthusiasm and support we feel from you across the many miles, and of course the authentic impact of your voice and your compositions that speaks directly to our collective humanity.

May you know peace my friend.

With heartfelt thanks,
Doug

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Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot Sir , you left me speechless with such words which really brought how nice noble you are my friend ..I do really appreciated these supprotive and encouragement words alot !!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

Joe Brady	Joe Brady said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
	Beautiful Love this Feter, it is very moving and I love the mix in the headphones. Brings to mind landscape images, as if setting up an epic movie. The organ is so expressive. Very Nice. Joe. Check out my latest song called Long Way From Denver

Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot Joe, really so happy to see you enjoyed this Drama ... words always so important and big here with me as they came from such talented musician like you !!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

LunaTrick	LunaTrick said 3580 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	This is magical Where did you get a reed organ? The composition shows your theoretical background... which is very impressively displayed throughout. Listened to it 3 times in a row (which I rarely do!) - that's how much I liked this piece. Check out my latest song called Luna Gypsy Heart II (Eternal Firelight)

Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx alot Daniel , o man you too kind ...a very good gentleman sent me this soundfonts long time ago ..and I based 90% of my organ works with ..so happy u enjoyed this work ..you are a very cool musician yourself hearing this from you made my day !!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

Patriotpizzaman	Patriotpizzaman said 3580 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Wow this thing is really taking off! Great composition. Really love part Four Check out my latest song called Livin' Lastin' Love

Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot David , always please to hear from you specially that you liked the Prayer part ...meant alot ! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

segiperkasa	segiperkasa said 3580 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Cool composition..... Really nice song..... Check out my latest song called Time to Let Go

Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx alot my friend ,so good to know you enjoyed it !!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

Mystified	Mystified said 3580 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Heartstrings .... Just beautiful, Feter. I love how the open chords in the center section move to full chords at the end. Hopeful and exalting. Beautiful! Check out my latest song called Elevated--Miss Chaos/Mystified vox

Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx alot Cat , so glad you enjoyed this Work ...sure you do best with such style hearing you liked it meant so much to me ...!!!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

Bob Rodgers

Bob Rodgers said 3580 days ago (February 27th, 2009)

Wow!
Fantastic pieces of music, love the opening brass and strings section, strong dynamics here and on all the parts.
Love all the string sounds, they sound great and the organ is superb.
Wonderful to hear this, sounds fantastic on my monitors.
A great recording and so good to hear your feelings expressed out in your music.
Great work Feter and very much enjoyed.
Download for me, thanks!

Bob

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Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot Bob, to see you enjoyed this Work I do really feel so happy .I m so appreciated for your support and encouragement always meant so much to me as they came from such great musician like you !!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

TracyVosh	TracyVosh said 3580 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Dramatic I'm already digging it 6 secs into it...very dramatic and dark. I can feel the different emotions through the instruments and it's cool how each part has a different life. It's gorgeous Feter!! Check out my latest song called Disappearance of The Earth Army (MJ SpaceRace Challenge)

Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx a lot Tracy , really meant so much for you to drop by and post these kind comments ...!!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

DWL	DWL said 3580 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	What did I expect? Nothing this raw and painful. Even not knowing the story this is heartwrenching. You've conveyed much in this piece. Kudos my friend, and I hope you find the the peace you deserve. Dick Check out my latest song called Cucamonga

Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx a lot Sir , I m so happy you enjoyed this and sensed the depth and the meaning of the story without details but music ...meant alot to me your support and wishes ..really appreciated them all !!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

Hydrogen3	Hydrogen3 said 3580 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	A story Very Nice! very nice arrangement!! Check out my latest song called Blindsided

Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot Holley , so glad you enjoyed this Drama !!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

tempie

tempie said 3580 days ago (February 27th, 2009)

Feter!
well, jeesh. First, I appreciate the simple fact that you tried this dude. Second, I appreciate how much talent you've got because you pulled it off. On the odd occasion I go to church it's to hear the organ music - how you can just sit there and be filled with it and feel better. I get that same feeling from this. Sounds goofy but the last part just gave me a huge chill - that's some large amount of emotion you have in there. Thanks boss.

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Feter	Feter said 3580 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot my friend ,I do really appreciate your kind comments .. and to hear the Organ parts and the last one reached you it fills my heart ...!!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

drakonis	drakonis said 3579 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	musical story of a life This is extremely ambitious, Feter! Very well done, a lot of drama and sadness, contemplative thoughts, and strength. A lot of thought and emotion went into this, well done, and "thanks for sharin'"! ttfn, Drakonis Check out my latest song called Miwok

Feter	Feter said 3579 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx a lot Draki , I really appreciate and cherish these kind comments and encouragements ...definitely made me so happy .. thank you for all Sir !!!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

yrp

yrp said 3579 days ago (February 27th, 2009)

it´s
touching, Feter.
The descriptions makes one feel it even deeper.
The 3rd movement is by far the most delicate and beautiful of them all.Congratulations!
You are not a nowhere man at all.You are a person so kind and generous that your light spreads around many hearts and you seem to be everywhere.
I hope you are blessed and successful in everything you do.
You do deserve it.

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Feter	Feter said 3579 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx a lot my friend , realy been touched by your kind comments and wishes so happy you enjoyed this drama and specially the 3rd it meant a lot ..this mean so much ..God Bless !!!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

lengold	lengold said 3579 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Feter you have proved again here what a great artist (in the truest sense) you are. This is pure art. I found the last section particularly moving. I truly hope that you will find what you are looking for one day, you seriously deserve and are due some very good fortune. Cheers Len Check out my latest song called Decent Girl

Feter	Feter said 3579 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx a lot Len , Man what a Gentleman you are ..you words and encouragements and now your kind wishes just filled me and I m so grateful for all ..so glad this drama meant something to you meant so much !!!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

Morning Light	Morning Light said 3579 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Very Moving...... What a masterpiece you have created! Very powerful emotions expressed........pure and gracefully done! Check out my latest song called Oh Blissful Bloom!

Feter	Feter said 3579 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx alot my friend , I m so happy you enjoyed this drama ..! peace !!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

Dadai.2	Dadai.2 said 3579 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Sacred music from your soul... I hardly can comment on it, as it is a litany so very personal, painful, and past/present in your life. Feter, I hear you telling me some of your story through this composition... may God grant you the deepest longings of your heart and His best be reserved for you dear friend. Jack Check out my latest song called Poor Wayfaring Stranger (final-2018)

Feter	Feter said 3579 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot Bro , I appreciate all of your kind and sincer support to me through the years ...and Amen to all of your prayers !!! peace !!!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

hongshan

hongshan said 3579 days ago (February 27th, 2009)

So moving!
Feter,

This is a very progressive piece of work,very apt and different to your other styles (amazing). The description suits the music well. I love the dark overtones in the beginning (parts) and how they gradually lighten in part 3 (love) and then deepen in part 4 (Hope) . The whole song has a very 'churchy' almost Eastern European feel to me,which really works well . Once again Feter I'm very moved by your songs. This is your life and you have expressed it so well.

Such a talented soul you are!

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Feter	Feter said 3579 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx a lot Micky , I m so happy to see you enjoyed these parts and the whole work ..you too kind my friend to say these kind and supportive comments ..!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

guitapick	guitapick said 3579 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Hi Feter... ...this is some fine, fine music...we will continue to work towards a more just and peaceful world...and keep the faith that such a world will be a part of the natural order. Check out my latest song called 'Cuz I Can

Feter	Feter said 3579 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx a lot my friend ,Indeed Amen to such hope and wishes ..so glad you enjoyed this ..!!!! peace !!!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

Jarvoid

Jarvoid said 3579 days ago (February 28th, 2009)

Truly
I think your best ever.The last part in particular had me listening for a Russian Male Voice choir to start up and the whole thing hangs together really well.I find it powerful and solid rather than bleak ordepressing but then I think it is a piece that will have different meanings depending on the frame of mind you are in when you listen again and again...and it's deffo a repeater.
Cheers Bro

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Feter	Feter said 3578 days ago (February 28th, 2009)
	Peace !! Thnx alot my friend , I m so happy you give this a listen and found it speaking to you ..it is a drama meant to be my dairy .. and I wrote the last piece as a prayer for Hope ...really appreciate the kind words ...!!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

woofer3	woofer3 said 3579 days ago (February 28th, 2009)
	tension, stress and darkness within this piece, in a similar way to the music of Wagner though I can even hear Bach like strains here and there. Excellent work - love the organ passages as well. Warm wishes to you Feter. Check out my latest song called Drunken bakers [08-01]

Feter	Feter said 3578 days ago (February 28th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot John , hearing you enjoyed the organ piece meant alot cos you are a true talented pianist really thankful for all your kind words ..!!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

mowguy3	mowguy3 said 3579 days ago (February 28th, 2009)
	Wow what a story being told with music. You have captured the tone of each part and deliverd without flaw. Leaving room for thought in the listeners mind. What a job Mr. Feter. Fine Job! Be well, Russ Check out my latest song called What Would That Make Me?

Feter	Feter said 3578 days ago (February 28th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot Russ , really Appreciate your kind words ..what you heard just piece from my diary and I m glad they spoke to you without words ...!!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

Diviner	Diviner said 3578 days ago (February 28th, 2009)
	Very emotional music for a very emotional life. Well composed, and liked all the stages. Nice one Feter. Check out my latest song called Away ft Lokka

Feter	Feter said 3578 days ago (February 28th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot my friend , so glad you enjoyed this drama really thankful for your kind words !! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

paul f. page

paul f. page said 3578 days ago (February 28th, 2009)

Your classical...
...comps are still my favorite pieces. Organ and strings -- such a medieval sound you create, and one that reflects so well the pain and conflict you express in your narrative. Your style with the organ is so unique, Feter. You always find a special way to throw in trills and those fleeting 16th notes that provide color and style. This is a gorgeous little suite with a big heart and a profound personal message. It is compelling on so many levels.
Peace.
Paul

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Feter

Feter said 3578 days ago (February 28th, 2009)

Peace !!!!
Thnx a lot Sir, I was really waiting for your words cos I have to
admit to hear words from you this mean I really succeed a bit from
my reading to your pieces those you generously provide with open
heart that I m really so grateful ,These are just pieces from my
dairy I usually wrote down as they expresses what I m getting into
day to day ...and your remark for Medieval style is what I want to
tell all those who mentioned the russian sound I think its just
the old medieval sound and somehow all the world at that era
somehow the music share these scales ..again Sir ..thank you so
very much for your kind words really honor to see you writing me
your support and encouragement ..God Bless !

peace !!!!

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NorthPoint	NorthPoint said 3578 days ago (February 28th, 2009)
	majestic Bravo Feter - moody, atmospheric, wonderful. Well done. -- Alan Check out my latest song called Still Waters

Feter	Feter said 3578 days ago (February 28th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx a lot Alan , I m so happy you enjoyed this drama ...really kind of you !!!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

TilSupper	TilSupper said 3577 days ago (March 1st, 2009)
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Feter	Feter said 3577 days ago (March 1st, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx alot friend , will sure be lookin for our music and I ve been known as a good espresso maker would love to share some with you Kudos ...and welcome to MJ peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

Estella	Estella said 3577 days ago (March 2nd, 2009)
	Wow Wow Wow What a creation! I would love to hear it performed by all the instrumentalists. You've conveyed something special through your computer, something full of real emotion, and hearing it played on the instruments you intended would expand from that! You will find peace because you are open to it through music. Best of luck Feter! Check out my latest song called Insomnia

Feter	Feter said 3576 days ago (March 2nd, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot Estellie , your kind words meant alot and your wishes meant more ..I know .I experienced hearing my classical music been played by real instrumentalists but this is what I have now glad you found it close to real and brought what I wanted to say here .... thank you !!!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

damiengh

damiengh said 3576 days ago (March 2nd, 2009)

The Beautiful Painful Thing
Feter, I knew of some of your pain, but not of it's depth. You really have accomplished revealing this with this work.

Actually, I was quite surprised by this piece, for I did not know this musical side of you and had made some assumptions about your musical background, which were obviously wrong.

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Feter	Feter said 3576 days ago (March 2nd, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx alot Damien , I just so happy you enjoyed this Drama and the way it speaks to you that it reached you ..my musical background so humble you just too kind ! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

mvh9591	mvh9591 said 3576 days ago (March 2nd, 2009)
	Nice____ Feter, Very nice work – not a real orchestra but sounding pretty close. I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing, mvh : ) Check out my latest song called There's No Place Like Home

Feter	Feter said 3576 days ago (March 2nd, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx alot Mike , I m so happy you enjoyed this Drama ...I know this is nothing like real Orch ..but this is what available and I m happy it works in a way ...appreciate your kind words !!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

Fourth Window	Fourth Window said 3574 days ago (March 4th, 2009)
	I love the eire into has a kinda of dark osund like it should be in star wars I picture old darth vader slashing away. then the mood changes which is increadable great job Check out my latest song called Picture Screen

Feter	Feter said 3574 days ago (March 4th, 2009)
	Peace !! Thnx alot my friend , just glad you enjoyed this Drama .. peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

dirigent	dirigent said 3572 days ago (March 7th, 2009)
	A Story Dramatic and intense soundart. The first track in this genre I heard from you as far as I remember - but I'm not surprised how you succeeded in masterfully you crafting this wonderful tune. You're a true musician, bravo Feter!!! Check out my latest song called Flow My Tears

Feter	Feter said 3571 days ago (March 7th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot Sir , I do really appreciate and respect your kind comments always so supportive and so giving really so thankful peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

kassia

kassia said 3569 days ago (March 9th, 2009)

feter
i'm sorry it took me so long to get here. WOW! what a journey! there is so much emotion in this - every moment. heartbreak and hope - discouragement and determination. wonderful instrument choices. I especially love the low brass in the opening. the sound/production of this is excellent. Feter this is a masterpiece - wow. thank you for sharing this.

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Feter	Feter said 3569 days ago (March 9th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot Shaye , this is very kind of you these kind words .. really apprec iated them as they came from a real talented musician like you ! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

anomalous	anomalous said 3568 days ago (March 10th, 2009)
	well theres not much i can say that hasnt been said already! but, to me, truly awesome and inspiring. Check out my latest song called Nevermind

Feter	Feter said 3568 days ago (March 10th, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx a lot my friend , so glad you enjoyed this blues collab really kind of you !!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

that80sboy	that80sboy said 3567 days ago (March 12th, 2009)
	very nice! i have got to get out more listening here...as i am missing very good stuff like this piece...love the emotion on this feter Check out my latest song called stargazer

Feter	Feter said 3566 days ago (March 12th, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx alot my friend , Glad you enjoyed this Drama .. indeed there are alot of cool stuffs around you need to catch up with ! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

maxjsl37	maxjsl37 said 3564 days ago (March 14th, 2009)
	An Absolute work of art. Very daring, musical truth. The song speaks a language all it's own. Epic and controlled. Great job Feter....... I am very impressed. Check out my latest song called Perfect Stranger (with Gaylen75)

Feter	Feter said 3564 days ago (March 14th, 2009)
	Peace !! Thnx alot John , you know I always appreciate your kind comments and support ..so glad you enjoyed this Drama ! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

maxjsl37	maxjsl37 said 3564 days ago (March 14th, 2009)
	Btw Would it be ok if I download it? Check out my latest song called Perfect Stranger (with Gaylen75)

Feter	Feter said 3564 days ago (March 14th, 2009)
	Sure ! with appreciation to know that you would want to ! a real pleasure ! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

blaky smith	blaky smith said 3562 days ago (March 16th, 2009)
	Late I'm so late, sorry Feter... But never too late to listen to this beautiful piece, great piece, I like it, very well done. Bravo ! Marc Check out my latest song called Un jour de décembre

Feter	Feter said 3562 days ago (March 16th, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx alot Marc , no never late ...so glad you drop by and gave this a listen ..so glad you enjoyed it ! peace ~!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

WharmtonRise	WharmtonRise said 3558 days ago (March 20th, 2009)
	'A Story' Probably should have named it 'My Story'. Music should really always be linked to one's emotions at any given time and if it isn't is it really music or just work? Here lies the difference. A tremendously heartfelt piece to be sure. Bravo indeed! Check out my latest song called Hunted

Feter	Feter said 3558 days ago (March 20th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot my friend , so good to see you enjoyed this drama which sure its mine ...really kind of your these kind words ! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

davidsmith99	davidsmith99 said 3556 days ago (March 22nd, 2009)
	Story Amazing how emotion can give life to music, and a few words can provide such a powerful context. Good! Check out my latest song called Blue Jeans, Blouse and Army Boots [guitar trio]

Feter	Feter said 3556 days ago (March 23rd, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx alot my friend ,really such kind words came from a talented and prolific composer made me so happy ...really kind of you ! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

paralax	paralax said 3550 days ago (March 29th, 2009)
	cool very subtle and interesting piece each part fits the mood for sure. very cool Terry Check out my latest song called Blues instrumental ( Callab with FEEL )

Feter	Feter said 3549 days ago (March 29th, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx alot Terry ,really glad you enjoyed this Drama !! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

Day-Dreamer	Day-Dreamer said 3549 days ago (March 29th, 2009)
	Story Drama from the heart and depth of your soul and that's what counts . Very nice enjoyed. Thanks for sharing Check out my latest song called IT'S OVER (V2)

Feter	Feter said 3549 days ago (March 29th, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx alot Dee , realy glad yu enjoyed this Drama ! Peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

Bob6stringer

Bob6stringer said 3549 days ago (March 29th, 2009)

Living in his nowhere land? Be well
Quite a break from the blues, brother from a nowhere land. Instrumental? Part two DID have vocals, or so it seemed, in the organ settings or at least very loudly between the lines. Part Three's initial ramping-up is lighter on the feet (or keys), more of a springtime feeling comes through. Then onto the Fourth: If I had prayer in me I'd pray for you. I'll try and channel that old piece of me and do that for you, tonight, my (and our) distant yet always right-here brother.

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Feter	Feter said 3549 days ago (March 30th, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx alot Bob , your thoughts and kind words always appreciated my brother ! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

sschedra

sschedra said 3547 days ago (March 31st, 2009)

Feter!
What . . .? How did I miss this? Four movements that tell a life story. Pretty impressive. Part 1 - Somber, dramatic. Part 2 Imploring, the lonely voice. Part 3 Gentle, romantic (the lonely voice has company). Part 4 - Serene, majestic. I am very pleased by this. I am grateful for your sharing such an intimate portrait with us.
Thanks you,
Stephen

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Feter	Feter said 3547 days ago (March 31st, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot Stephen , so happy that you give this a listen your comments always so important ...looks for you other further comments of my works here ...thank you !!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

Relic67	Relic67 said 3544 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
	wow Very impressive! the organ and brass sounds are marvelous. as others have noted, you managed to convey a lot of feeling in this composition. As with your other work, emotion and honesty are always right there. I would have liked part four to go on a bit longer though... Check out my latest song called Dead Archive

Feter	Feter said 3543 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot my friend ,Really too kind of you saying these nice comments ...the music write itself cant give it longer or shorter glad you enjoyed it ! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

SmokeyVW

SmokeyVW said 3541 days ago (April 6th, 2009)

wonderful
1 i like how you made the reverb resonate in key with the blend of strings and horns. cool.

2 the pipe organ melody does seem to be seeking. the treatment of the strings is interesting - comb filtering that changes pitch with each chord - don't know if that was on purpose, but it works!

3 the two voices played on organ is very contemplative

4 the final strings seem majestic as well as like prayer

the ending seemed a little abrupt and unexpected to me... but perhaps that is what you meant?

wonderful

thanks!

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Feter	Feter said 3541 days ago (April 6th, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx alot my friend , so glad you enjoyed this ...your generous comments just made me happy ...maybe you wanted the piece 4 be get longer ..I cant do more what it told me to do I just let it down as it is now ..and it is a prayer ..thank you so very much for the kind comments ! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

Sir Bass	Sir Bass said 3541 days ago (April 7th, 2009)
	Brother In Pain this is awesome. Love it. Thanks for the download. Check out my latest song called Happiness Happenis

Feter	Feter said 3541 days ago (April 7th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot my friend , so happy you enjoyed this Drama ...! peace !!!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

Macaudion

Macaudion said 3538 days ago (April 9th, 2009)

Feter!...
What a magnificent journey you've just taken me on, Feter! I had no idea that your mind worked in these ways! I showed up all dressed up for a blues show and was not unpleasantly surprised by your offerings! Just stunning piece of work. Listening to this piece has caused me to rearrange my mind with how and what you might be hearing of what I do or more likely, what I haven't done with orchestral work. In fact, it caused me to reprogram my entire false virtual image that I had of you into one that's even more, madly impressive. Though, you'd be happy with either because both images had you as a consummate musician with the latter one, of broader and further reaching in range of talents that you are clearly, way beyond in touch with. I could go on but will end it with a simple, thank you! Thanks for sharing your art. I exit your song page feeling quite satiated by this lovely piece that you have so graciously gifted us with. Really a beautiful piece, Sir. Truly, thank you. Dion

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Feter	Feter said 3538 days ago (April 10th, 2009)
	Peace !!! Ahh Dion ..you really too kind to said this ...nothing special there just me and my life ..so happy you enjoyed this my friend thanx alot for your kind comments ...! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

DeathArrow	DeathArrow said 3538 days ago (April 10th, 2009)
	lalala wow that is really dramatic !! the instrumentation of the strings is so brilliant and the organ underlines the whole song ! nice that you show your feelings in that way. it's so emotional !! expression impression both.. Feter, this is GREAT ! fav'd !! cheers, Luke Check out my latest song called Ghost

Feter	Feter said 3538 days ago (April 10th, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx alot Luke , so glad you enjoyed this drama ..! peace !!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

quarkhead said 3536 days ago (April 12th, 2009)

Stunning work!
Really, quite a masterpiece here. You have such an organic understanding of melodic progression - this music sounds like, I don't know, sort of a more raw - and visceral - Philip Glass. And I mean that in a purely great way. There are very few people who make what they do seem effortless, and though I have so far only listened to this one song, I am sure you are one of them. I'm obviously going to have to start going through the rest of your songs! Maestro, I bow to you.

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Feter	Feter said 3535 days ago (April 12th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot my friend ,So glad you enjoyed this Drama ..your kind comments flattered me and made me feel so grateful for your encouragement spirit really thankful ..! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

echoroom	echoroom said 3536 days ago (April 12th, 2009)
	Talk about a change of direction! Dark, stirring, passionate - a real stunner! Check out my latest song called Light Sleeper

Feter	Feter said 3535 days ago (April 12th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot my friend , so glad you enjoyed this Drama ..so happy your drop by and gave this a listen ! Peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

John Stebbe

John Stebbe said 3532 days ago (April 16th, 2009)

Nowhere man?
Feter, you're no 'Nowhere Man." You wrote about praying to God. You are made in His image, and he knows you better than you know yourself. "Before a word is on my tongue, you know it completely, O Lord." (Psalm 139:4)

I really like the pipe organ parts, set against the string section. Hmm -- now I hear solo pipe organ. You wrote this? It has wonderful structural qualities, and is nicely recorded. I could believe I am sitting in the Lutheran church I grew up in, listening to the pre-service music.

The string parts on the fourth section really reveal a complex, serious person behind this composition. Sounds liked you have listened to a lot of J. S. Bach, and have learned a lot from him.

Overall, an excellent piece of music.

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Feter

Feter said 3531 days ago (April 16th, 2009)

Peace !!!!
O John , I really appreciate your kind words ad that you enjoyed
this Drama ...hearing these kind comments coming from a very well
crafted and skilled keyboardist and pianist made me feel so happy
and that my message reached .Yes, I m the one who wrote these and
many more Organ works ... J.S Bach along with Henry F Handle Purcel and Vivaldi and cant ignored Albinoni those who I real feels they
fused this passion for strings and organs .. Sir I m so thankful
for all your comments ...!

peace !!!!

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Boundless	Boundless said 3528 days ago (April 20th, 2009)
	Thoughtful Thanks Feter for those beautiful moments. I look forward to explore more of your music here. Salaam. Check out my latest song called Weather or Not - Jim Bouchard's Collab

Feter	Feter said 3528 days ago (April 20th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot bernard, seeing you enjoyed this drama made me so happy ...I really appreciate your kind comments and will look forward for more of yours ...! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

loyd vader

loyd vader said 3527 days ago (April 21st, 2009)

romantic like brahms
has that middle range grunt that romantic music has before the classical period went psycho on solo instrument with backing.
part 3 has a jesu joy of mans desiring feel to it imho, which is all win !!!!!
part 4 is really up my alley though.......f^@k yeah !!!!
what did u use for the orchestra and organ?
i find edirol orchestral suite to be the most accurate vst representation of classical instruments, but have never found a .dmg file so have always had to use p.c for my orchestrations.
really like this sort of music, and you have bullseyed it brother !!!!!
again, well done !!!!

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Feter

Feter said 3527 days ago (April 21st, 2009)

Peace !!!
Thnx alot my friend , so glad you enjoyed this you are a great
talented music yourself and your progressive orchestration say it
all ...I used sibelius 2.2 for writing all these sheets note by note
then export them as Midi files then dealt with them on my old
fruityloops 4 with good soundfonts library ...all I did is applied
some reverb and vilocity adjustments to suit the arrangement I want
the outcome will sounds like ... really grateful for your kind
comments !

peace !!!!

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fathom	fathom said 3520 days ago (April 27th, 2009)
	My goodness Feter this is quite a trip you've taken us on. Highly personal, sweeping and grand. At times it suggests a Philip Glass Symphony to me. A remarkable work. Congratulations and thanks for sharing this masterwork with us my friend. Check out my latest song called 8 o'clock Cowboy

Feter	Feter said 3520 days ago (April 27th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot my friend , certainly your kind comments and words meant alot to me as they came from a very talented composer really appreciate your these !!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

Eli_Wise	Eli_Wise said 3512 days ago (May 6th, 2009)
	story Your music is beautiful - you have so much to express, thank you for these windows into your experience. Check out my latest song called Lost in an Open World

Feter	Feter said 3511 days ago (May 6th, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx alot my friend , so glad you enjoyed this Drama !!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

Kori Arashi

Kori Arashi said 3477 days ago (June 10th, 2009)

:D
Nice work Feter! So glad to hear some of your new works since it has been forever since I've been here. I really enjoyed how this piece was sort of split up into chapters based on your personal life experience. I'm curious if you'll do another piece like this since it's so hard to come up with something to express certain feelings that flows together well. Keep up the great work and I'll hopefully chat to you soon whenever I get the time (Hopefully after this quarter ends with 17 units!) :3

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Feter	Feter said 3476 days ago (June 10th, 2009)
	Peace !!! Hey Thnx my friend , I m so happy you gave this a visit and very appreciate the kind comments ... music is avauilable and tones of those ...wrote alot through the days as daily and you can imagine ...I ll look for to chat with you soon ...Good luck !!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

AlchymicalMuse	AlchymicalMuse said 3418 days ago (August 7th, 2009)
	Excellent Like this loads! Check out my latest song called Garden of Love (after William Blake)

Feter	Feter said 3418 days ago (August 8th, 2009)
	Peace !!!! Thnx alot my friend ,I m happy you enjoyed this drama !!!! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

IdleBel10	IdleBel10 said 3328 days ago (November 5th, 2009)
	Bravo... I like the way that you broke this piece into sections. concise and true to form for this genre of music- I must say a lost art to most of the world but you have pulled it off magnificently. Mixed brilliantly, production was one of the best that I have heard in a while. Outstanding- thank you for sharing such a great piece Check out my latest song called It's Too late (remix)

Feter	Feter said 3328 days ago (November 5th, 2009)
	Peace !!! Thnx alot my friend ,its really pleasant to see you enjoyed these pieces I remarkable writer like you wrote such kind comments really made my day ! peace !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

composerclark

composerclark said 2957 days ago (November 11th, 2010)

Musical Poetry
Part 1: Intense, dark energy... love the chords created with horns and strings. As Cameron says, it has something of a Russian feel (those guys do dark musical colours very well!).

Part 2: This one is also a bit dark, but it sounds like an exploration, like someone feeling their way along a path, not being quite sure what they will find.

Part 3: Introspective music for the soul. Very beautiful. I can hear the love.

Part 4: Dramatic, serious music, as if from a film. This too is very beautiful and tells a story.

You are not a nowhere man; you are an everywhere man, with a beautiful and poetic soul.

It would be wonderful to hear more compositions like this from you; I know it's a lot of work, though!

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Feter

Feter said 2957 days ago (November 11th, 2010)

Peace !!
Thanks a lot Sir , These words and comments meant so much and I can tell you I ve been waiting for too long to see you pass by and give this a listen ,As a true composer I do respect a lot and from a talented music its all for me to hear those kind comments ..I stopped writing classical pieces for a while now so all I can say is Thank you from the deep of my heart

Peace to you !!

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