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| kassia said 3596 days ago (April 14th, 2009) | |
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oh and i forgot to say that i really like the slow moving chords, the lingering resolutions. beautiful. Check out my latest song called Greensleeves
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| T_Being_esq said 3596 days ago (April 14th, 2009) | |
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Glad you Liked It I must admit it was a bit of a sketch. I could have let it carry on with out a melody line, but I thought that may get boring. I tried some percussive element I could not as yet find anything that fitted. My mind is so scattered at times. I am so glad it was a nice start to the day for you as that was its purpose. Check out my latest song called Metal Cajun Swap Gas
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| davajonah said 3596 days ago (April 14th, 2009) | |
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Really nice! I wouldn't do too much with it, it sounds good enough to me. Maybe a touch of sub-bass in there somewhere? A nice background throb? And I would fade it out too, somehow. I think the ending is too abrupt. It's a nice piece of ambientia though, real cool. Nice one! Check out my latest song called Lost and Found
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| T_Being_esq said 3596 days ago (April 14th, 2009) | |
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Work in progress I was thinking about a fade out on a wall of phase. Sea ebbing and flowing something like that. There is kind of a bass in there may be I need to drop it an octave and punch up the EQ. Check out my latest song called Metal Cajun Swap Gas
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| davisamerica said 3596 days ago (April 14th, 2009) | |
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right then... opening crescendo really works for me. Some merit to some of shay's advice about bringing some of the sub melodies up some but ... all in all ... really great bones on this. Enjoyed the listen a lot. Check out my latest song called ok char2(Vic and Flatrock mix)
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| T_Being_esq said 3596 days ago (April 14th, 2009) | |
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That's what I Like about MJ. You get such good advice. Great when you need a helping hand. Check out my latest song called Metal Cajun Swap Gas
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| Rebsie said 3596 days ago (April 14th, 2009) | |
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Nice chilled piece of synth work. I think Kassia has some good advice ... a few percussive elements or different textures would help it to trip along. Has a pleasantly upbeat feel to it anyway. Check out my latest song called Amongst The Colours (w/ Luna Trick)
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| T_Being_esq said 3596 days ago (April 14th, 2009) | |
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Thank You. I am getting more inspired by the minute. Check out my latest song called Metal Cajun Swap Gas
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| magnatone said 3596 days ago (April 14th, 2009) | |
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Distance Trance kassia's ideas are all really good ones, and i agree that a slow fade out might work better as an ending. but the basics of this are really well done, and i gotta say - i love your little gnome guy too! nice to have you aboard! Check out my latest song called Hallelujah (Leonard Cohen) and Variations
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| T_Being_esq said 3596 days ago (April 14th, 2009) | |
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I Know I am on the right track if you enjoyed it. The Gnome guy lives in my back garden at home by the way. He is quite friendly and always smiling. Check out my latest song called Metal Cajun Swap Gas
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| Reinholt56 said 3595 days ago (April 15th, 2009) | |
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Hi TBEsq...... The title threw me somewhat. I had to listen to hear what your idea was. I like the PAD-effect and will listen more to get the full picture. Take care. Paul Check out my latest song called Dystopian Summer (A Future For The Masses Mix)
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| T_Being_esq said 3594 days ago (April 16th, 2009) | |
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Reinholt Thanks for the listen. The piece was an attempt to create meditative music, a piece to uplift and refresh, to be honest I think the title was a throw away working title somethinmg I tend to do a lot. I am currently working on a more complete version and the direction in which it is morphing at the moment, I may well change the title to Sea Scape or something of that ilk. Check out my latest song called Metal Cajun Swap Gas
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| Ex_Silentio said 3593 days ago (April 16th, 2009) | |
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Distant trance. Oh, I really like the chords and melody here. Really soaring and joyful. My $.02 is that you should not consider adding percussion. Ambient does not need percussion, generally speaking. But I always say that. Maybe EQ a little fizz off the top? Too many cooks, eh? And, of course, the ending needs some attention, but you already knew that. Frazzle up some more. Check out my latest song called Submerged
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| T_Being_esq said 3593 days ago (April 17th, 2009) | |
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Most kind of you. I am currently working on an update. It is turning into a bit of a 10 minute monster. I have been experimenting with adding a two note psuedo arpegio doubled with a bass version of the same thing to add a little rythmic content. I have been working on the ending. I hope you will like the re-post. Check out my latest song called Metal Cajun Swap Gas
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kassia
have i told you that i love your little gnome guy? i do! this is a great ambient piece. very relaxing. i think you have a wonderful start here and would love to see where you take this in further development. the pseudo-melody line in the higher synth seemed to get lost a little - i would bring that out a little more. maybe put in some different textures here and there - something a little more percussive once in awhile to keep the forward momentum going? and an ending! it needs an ending! lol...this is a great way to start my morning. very much enjoyed - i look forward to hearing more. thanks!