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Listening to the feedback I've addressed the issues with the bass on the first remix and also attended to the quiet vocal part in the middle with a frequency boost. The drums have also been raised a tad.
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Uploaded: Jul 08, 2009 - 05:54:16 AM
Last Updated: Feb 23, 2010 - 10:54:09 AM Last Played: Apr 07, 2019 - 11:31:06 AM
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Feter said 3751 days ago (July 8th, 2009)
This is solid ...it works fine on my headset ..good production
loved the guitars and the bass ...works fine together ...kudos
.thnx alot for sharin !!!!
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T_Being_esq said 3751 days ago (July 8th, 2009)
A much better mix tonally. Gels lot better. Makes enjoying a wonderful song even easier. Vocals stand out just fine. I still love it, only more so
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Char said 3751 days ago (July 8th, 2009)
good message. Good song. Thanks.
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sheilad said 3751 days ago (July 8th, 2009)
3rd time
posting and I keep coming back... love this one! thanks for updated d/l
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sloparts said 3751 days ago (July 8th, 2009)
More energy
That's the first thing I noticed. I really like the changes you made Paddy. The vox is clearer now which is goo, and it's not so hot that it turns it too loud for the style. Still got those great back tracks, but now they're cleaner and have more drive.

I love this mix my friend. Great job Paddy

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lengold said 3750 days ago (July 9th, 2009)
Just gets better and better.
Downloaded. Thanks.

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chronologic said 3748 days ago (July 11th, 2009)
Cool song. The drum kit is the only thing that jumps out at me, it sounds like an excessively sampled setup, very little organic to it, and it does feel a bit restricted and distracting. But I apologize for bringing it up. Since you are revising you might want to try another kit option!

Something about your vocals on this one are different from things I have heard on your past songs -- you are putting out a new style and a new strength to my ears. Kind of... REM style maybe? Sounds great! Keep at it!
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davisamerica said 3745 days ago (July 14th, 2009)
nice mix
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davisamerica said 3396 days ago (June 28th, 2010)
popped up the MJ Player and it was totally worth coming back to tell you how cool this track still sounds...hey I actually remembered it...a huge feat!
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PaddyNavinCaryatid said 3395 days ago (June 29th, 2010)
thanks dude, nice to know the stuff is popping up on the player. Kind words, glad you enjoyed it.
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JAB24 said 3038 days ago (June 21st, 2011)
Very powerful ! Very catchy ! Love it ! If you put in a Falsetto Harmony (3rd incriment) it would really enhance the Melody. I hate when I sound like a smart ass when I don't intend to sound that way. I was singing along doing the harmony and it sounds really good.some of the sudell guitar parts are great. I really like your work. Awesome job!
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