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On a Day Like This


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cloudfactory

 Genre: Indie Rock

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This is merely a rough draft demo...changes to come soon. Let me know what you think, I need input. Thanks!
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Is anyone sad in the world I wonder, does anyone ever weep on a day like this, with the sun up above and the green earth under. "Why, what is life but a dream of bliss?"... someone said to me in the street this morning as I opened my window to let the light in of the dark that was dawning.

And you threw it all away, and you threw it all away, nothing is left to say, and you threw it all away.
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Uploaded: Jul 17, 2009 - 08:55:25 AM
Last Updated: Oct 28, 2009 - 11:55:29 AM Last Played: Jan 31, 2019 - 01:23:17 PM
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Godchaser said 3503 days ago (July 17th, 2009)
I like it
Like the tempo the lyrics the sound sources the vibe thus far.One man's rough draft is many a man's final version.perhaps a slow build after the cutoff point of the demo to complete.Good stuff!

Blessings
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davisamerica said 3503 days ago (July 17th, 2009)
daniel said it best
... some guys rough is another guy's goal. really nice work
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Lennon714 said 3503 days ago (July 17th, 2009)
Very, very cool
You've got loads of talent, Brenton. The ghost story ending is brilliant, as are the guitar sounds. There are people on MJ that don't like dirty vocals, I'm not one of them. Get filthy. This tracks shines. Great job!
cloudfactory said 3502 days ago (July 17th, 2009)
to Lennon
Hey thank you very much. The ghost ending was an accident..but I liked it. And the dirty vox...I just like the trashy sound sometimes. Thanks, have a good day!
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I.G.M. said 3502 days ago (July 17th, 2009)
First of all
I want to let you know that I really like it!!
Some suggestions: use more breaks, more pauses, parts in which the listener can relax a little.
Watch out for unnecessary length and kill it!! :o)
Verse melody is strong and well intoned, melody in the "chorus" is too slack, as if you`re bored or something.
Just my personal opinion.
Congrats on a good one.
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cloudfactory said 3502 days ago (July 17th, 2009)
I.G.M.
Thanks for the input. I will def consider some of these qualities when going to finalize. Thanks!
Check out my latest song called Another Way
shavingronaldscar said 3400 days ago (October 28th, 2009)
word!
Great track, sounding really tight.
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cloudfactory said 3400 days ago (October 28th, 2009)
thanks
Thanks Shavingronald I'll check out your tunes! peace and blessings,
Check out my latest song called Another Way
cloudfactory said 3400 days ago (October 28th, 2009)
thanks
Thanks Shavingronald I'll check out your tunes! peace and blessings,
Check out my latest song called Another Way
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Name: Brenton Little
Location: Dallas Texas United States
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This is my solo music....I just have to let out my own personal creativity somewhere. Creating music without limits, without opinions, described as "Floaty" by Christian Baxter. "Completely original" - Seth Flood. "Magnum...just amazing!" - Kevin How... [see more]

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