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Right Words (Acoustic)



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Busted a string and just worked with it because I was too lazy to get to the shops for new strings.
Recorded live, but may get a fuller treatmenat later, when above laziness moves on.
And yeah, it's a break-up song, but I'm okay.


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Whether we are friends or not,
We've come to the end of love,
Were we something we should have never started, let alone started again?
What were we thinking then?

At least tonight...
I didn't have the right words to tell and now you're gone,
I didn't have the right words to sell you on another lonely winter...
Winters should never be spent apart.

I think you think,
"I taken enough, you never listened that much,
and now we're through, at least I'm through with you."

You think I haven't taken it hard? there aint enough love in my heart?
maybe it's true, at least not enough for you

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Uploaded: Aug 18, 2009 - 09:14:37 AM
Last Updated: Jul 19, 2010 - 05:02:14 AM Last Played: Jul 08, 2019 - 05:02:33 PM
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Macbook 2GHz, Maton small-body acoustic, Shure SM-57, M-Audio fast-track
Feter said 3681 days ago (August 18th, 2009)
Right Words
lovely song ...enjoyed the chords progression
wish to hear this on a wider range with a full
band ...good song ..thnx a lot for sharin !!!!
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lavalamp said 3680 days ago (August 19th, 2009)
Hey Like it a bunch
Reminds me of a lot of Elliott Smith, but a bit nervous. This has some very nice potential to be a bigger, better song. I like this very, very much.

Just lay it out there my friend. Freakin' good tune.


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dantimmermans said 3679 days ago (August 20th, 2009)
that's an interesting and useful comment. this was recorded quietly and late at night, which may not have been the best approach because I too hear a quivering/faltering to the vocal.
I've got a lot of ideas to make this bigger and more complete - I'll give myself a goal for the weekend :)
I think Elliott Smith is an interesting comparison - I'll have a listen to more of his stuff, I only really know the Good Will Hunting songs.
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JayLCiazz said 3670 days ago (August 29th, 2009)
Bust a string more often!
Great songwriting here.. love your voice a lot on this one! Straight from the heart..
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Name: Dan Timmermans
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