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Can't Let Go Of You


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abitran128

 Genre: Art Rock

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This is a slow rock ballad style song. It features my dad on the string section parts, and my 9 year old sister on the solo cello at the end. Containing both jazz and classical influences, it is one of my few songs that does not have electric guitar. Enjoy!
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Lyrics
Chorus: I can't let go of you
There's nothing I can do.
You'll just have to deal with it
I can't let go of you.

I've known you for so long
Then suddenly, you're gone.
I should have known and been aware
Of what was gonna come.

Now I've been left alone,
And there is no one home,
To help me, guide me, deal with me
The way that you would do.

(Chorus)

You buried me in snow
When you said you would go.
Now I am stuck, I can't move on
And leave behind my past.

And everywhere I look,
All I see is you.
You're haunting me through your betrayal
Of what had been your love.

(Chorus)

(Cello Solo)
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Uploaded: Sep 08, 2009 - 06:51:38 AM
Last Updated: Sep 08, 2009 - 06:51:38 AM Last Played: Jul 08, 2019 - 07:43:45 PM
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VicDiesel said 3594 days ago (September 11th, 2009)
Good song writing
You have a good melody here, and your use of chords is sophisticated. I think the arrangement can be improved. Too often parts are all playing the same rhythm, which disrupts the flow of the song a bit. When you're arranging, ask yourself with each part if it really has something unique to say. Is how I approach arranging.
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abitran128 said 3594 days ago (September 11th, 2009)
Thanks
Thanks for commenting. By parts, do you mean the instruments? or the voices in the string section?
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VicDiesel said 3594 days ago (September 11th, 2009)
I mean
instruments. So I consider the string section as one instrument.
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crissew said 3594 days ago (September 11th, 2009)
Nice vocal line melody
I agree with Vic in that the backing track could use a bit of work. I think you need something that flows more. The vocal flows smoothly and the music is abrupt. Like the cello and the vocal line is great. I think the song would sound worlds better with a smoother flowing rhythm part. A lot of potential here.
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debmac said 3594 days ago (September 11th, 2009)
catchy tune....
liked the fact the the music was uplifting even tho the storyline was of heartbreak....would like to hear the music flow more too....
great lyrics..."you buried me in snow.....when you said you would go"
your words paint a vivid picture!
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Name: Amir Bitran
Location: Brookline Ma United States
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Hello and thank you for coming to my profile. I am Amir Bitran and I was born in Pittsburgh, Pa. I have lived in multiple locations throughout the United States during my life, and I am currently settled in Brookline, ma. Music is an essential part o... [see more]

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Art rock is a sub-genre of rock music that is characterized by ambitious lyrical themes and melodic or rhythmic experimentation, often extending beyond standard pop song forms and toward influences in jazz, classical, or the avant-garde. The art rock

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