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bad bridge


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rayfieldstorm

 Genre: Art Rock

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just a jam that I have been working on with the generous comments and critiques of fellow macjammers.
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Hits: 1955
Comments: 9
Fans: 5
Plays: 168
Downloads: 67
Votes: 0
Uploaded: May 26, 2010 - 10:45:13 PM
Last Updated: May 27, 2010 - 10:46:29 AM Last Played: Mar 31, 2018 - 05:55:02 PM
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Reggie_Pole said 2920 days ago (May 27th, 2010)
Bad bridge
A few comments, since I see that this is a WIP. That greasy guitar at the start promises much fun, but then it fades away a bit too much. The dropout at 0:43 is very slick. Would sound good to have the guitar come back in bigger at 1:05, kick it up a notch. I would take out the loop at 1:27, since everyone has heard that a million times. No offense -- I have used that loop myself. :) Good idea to add a few chord changes through there. What's the deal with the harmonica? Did you do that? Nice in any case. The shaker runs throughout the piece. It would work better to drop it out once in awhile. A shaker is spice --- don't want too much. The tune probably needs a theme, either a repeated lead line or a vocalist. Just a few thoughts. Cool jam.
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rayfieldstorm said 2843 days ago (August 11th, 2010)
thank you
wow, thank you for taking the time to really listen and give me some strait fb. I would like to get back into this tune and try out everything (i think) that you mentioned. I really like playing and recording but I dont have much of a clue what Im doing so this is VERY helpful.
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Char said 2920 days ago (May 27th, 2010)
Yes,
a lot sounds great. The loop at 1:27 is too recognizable, yes. I've been thinking of just deleting the loops I have heard over and over. In the end we want our stuff to sound fresh and not let one loop steal focus. The harmonica works. :)
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rayfieldstorm said 2843 days ago (August 11th, 2010)
thank you
hey Char, thank you for taking the time to listen and comment.
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jdholliday said 2919 days ago (May 28th, 2010)
just a jam?
this has huge potential for vocals! group vocals, like a funky dancey r&b or maybe just an occasional chorus throughout! you know like "people get ready" kinda thang.
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rayfieldstorm said 2843 days ago (August 11th, 2010)
thank you
yea, people get ready, wouldnt I love that, that song has got some soul.I need to rework this with some of the very helpful comments I have received and in doing that Im going to dig around form my people get ready, in the mean time, thank you for you time and I have enjoyed your music as well, especially most recent Danny Boy.
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alackbass said 2853 days ago (August 1st, 2010)
bad bridge
How'd I miss this? This is funky! The little acoustic guitar tracks are wild!
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rayfieldstorm said 2843 days ago (August 11th, 2010)
dude
thanks for the pos fb, much appreciated, im going to listen to your tracks now!
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papag said 2843 days ago (August 11th, 2010)
This jam is in the jar
I like this tune alot. Fav'd and dl'd
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Art rock is a sub-genre of rock music that is characterized by ambitious lyrical themes and melodic or rhythmic experimentation, often extending beyond standard pop song forms and toward influences in jazz, classical, or the avant-garde. The art rock

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