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collab with amaturepro over at icomp
amaturepro: music
lyrics/vocals: mybravedesign

big death cab influence here..... i hear it in the music... i feel it in my vocals and lyrics... you decide

also took some advice and added a picture....yay
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Lyrics
a call at 3:09 leads to another train ride
a girl who only wears blue and never opens her eyes
she's calling for you yes she's waiting on the other side
another call to arms another lonely night
she'll take everything you know
and she will twist it round
you don't seem notice magic all around
so spread your wings and fly
takeoffs and landings call
her words are all around
until you hit the ground

will you fly?

another reason for the world to end today
the girl who only wears blue one day must fly away
head on collision life a train wreck not too severe
emotions take over….thats just how we got here

repeat v1
will you fly?
and you will never wake up until you hit the ground
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Hits: 2011
Comments: 14
Fans: 6
Plays: 182
Downloads: 44
Votes: 0
Uploaded: Jul 31, 2010 - 03:56:25 PM
Last Updated: Jul 31, 2010 - 03:56:25 PM Last Played: Nov 12, 2018 - 11:01:29 PM
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alackbass said 3055 days ago (July 31st, 2010)
never let you down
I like how the arrangement expands at :49.

Wonderful melody and nice vocal arrangement.
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mybravedesign said 3055 days ago (July 31st, 2010)
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thanks man.... i really love this type of sound as a whole..... i was really impressed with the expansion at :49 as well... thanks for stopping in
Check out my latest song called good day (to go out tonight) demo 2.0
jdholliday said 3055 days ago (July 31st, 2010)
honestly I'm not even sure
what indie rock is, though I have some posted in that genre.
I like this, I like your voice a lot, you almost lost me and then you got me back at 49 seconds with that hook, I have no idea what this song is about?, but I really like it...and the end is cool and I really like having 2 hooks in a song trying to do that too lately, and I like medleys like you did here, but I'm not sure you quite pulled it off with the 2 hooks and the verse all three together in the outro, close though, I very rarely ever say anything critical so please take this as a compliment, you have a great voice and I think a great song in the making here, that is why I say, I think you should work it, with more of a structure, a shorter verse, pick one hook and make that the centerpiece, and refine the lyrics so they make more sense unless you want them to be left open to interpretation? My latest post below is that way, wow sorry dude, I totally rambled and what I meant to say is I think you should work this song it's well worth it! Great post!
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mybravedesign said 3055 days ago (July 31st, 2010)
honestly...
thats what i'm working on right now.... the lyrics are staying open to interpretation... but as for the hooks and the ending... i'm working on getting it down to something solid and a better hook... thank you very much for your input... the type of song actually would call for longer verses and chorus' repeated out.... but i'm working with an already finished track here so i have to work around and already existing structure and still make the song convey the feeling that i imagine... again.. thank you for your words and thank you for listening...i'll be posting another version soon i'm sure..
Check out my latest song called good day (to go out tonight) demo 2.0
lavalamp said 3055 days ago (July 31st, 2010)
Alright, coolness
Like how unforced this is. Very fluid. You can tell this is a quite a natural tune for you. Works on all levels. Very, very nicely done.

LL
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mybravedesign said 3055 days ago (July 31st, 2010)
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def. natural for me... i have a pretty decent range and have never been able to find the right tune to try out this type of vocal before.... also getting better at actually recording vocals helps... still need to work on the mixing skills though....thanks for stopping in
Check out my latest song called good day (to go out tonight) demo 2.0
mybravedesign said 3055 days ago (July 31st, 2010)
NOTE
listen with headphones for a better experience.....
Check out my latest song called good day (to go out tonight) demo 2.0
dave_b said 3055 days ago (August 1st, 2010)
never let you down
I like the ambiguity in the lyrics. Could be about a real relationship, or a dream. The hook is good b/c it poses the question that is set up in the verses. If you can get your collaborator to agree, try working on the verse chorus transitions, and expanding the chorus.
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ramonaji said 3054 days ago (August 1st, 2010)
I like this!
moving song....!
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kevmikwa said 3054 days ago (August 1st, 2010)
I can relate
I work the same way as you've worked here - someone has a song that is complete save for one part and your job is to add the final piece. It has advantages (you can really focus on your thing without having to worry about levels) and disadvantages (you can't do anything about the underlying song if there's something you'd rather do differently).

I'll keep my comments to your contribution, though I will say amaturepro has done a great job with the underlying song and it matches your lyric and vocal range well.

I thought the first presentation of the chorus at 0:52 was a bit down in the mix, and I realize a part of that might be that you're nervous about how such a strong vocal would be when placed out in front. I like the hard pan at 1:52 as well as the way the verse vocal works against the chorus vocal and then the interplay later (2:30+). I think the chorus harmony at the 2:00 mark (and again at 2:20) might need a touch more polish. I love the idea of what you're going for and you're almost right there, but there's just a bit too much wavering for my ear.

Good stuff Sean, thanks for throwing this out there.
RAVENS said 3054 days ago (August 1st, 2010)
Very Cool
I had no idea you collabed with Alex. His tracks are just magic. Listening through headphones & this is sounds fab! You have such a great voice & I dig the angle you chose as far as a melody line. I hope you guys decide to collab again, great stuff!

RAVEN ;-)
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Vic Holman said 3054 days ago (August 1st, 2010)
well, you didn't let me down
a excellent track. your vocals are very fitting on this music track. i do pick up the DCFC inspiration. really nice work guys
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onesweetworld said 3017 days ago (September 7th, 2010)
wow
Isn't it amazing how one can interpret the same instrumental? I def. hear some death cab influences here. Great lyrics. I wish I could write like you!
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mybravedesign said 3017 days ago (September 7th, 2010)
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i agree... and death cab is def. in my top 5... thanks by the way... sometimes i don't even know where the lyrics come from... i write stream of consciousness sometimes and other times it's really planned out...
Check out my latest song called good day (to go out tonight) demo 2.0
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