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Uninvited Love Song


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brebell226

 Genre: Acoustic

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I just started learning ukulele like a month ago, and this is my first attempt at song writing on a stringed instrument... so here goes! Let me know what you think. This song was recorded with w snowball mic and no effects so if there are any recording and arrangement ideas i'd love to hear them. Thanks for listening!
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Lyrics
I
I once saw the sunrise
In your eyes
On a mountain top

I
I'm having a hard time
Trying to be alright
I fell I can't stop
I just drop

Chorus: And I (you/we) crash down at the speed of sound
Can't tell which way's up and which way's right
I know I'm wrong and you're too far gone
So I'll just play this song
For you tonight

You
Think I tried to forget you
Well maybe it's true
But I'm here again

I
I tried and I failed to
Move on to someone new
Now and then
I'm just a friend

Chorus

Bridge: I, I swear that I'm over it
I swear that I'm sure of it
I swear that I'm fine

You, you're off kissing other lips
So just think of this
When you wish they were mine

I
I once had no regrets
But your mint and cigarettes
Remind me I'm sorry

You
You feel just like I do
But you know it takes two
And I'm not your baby
It's just you and me

Chorus
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Comments: 4
Fans: 3
Plays: 77
Downloads: 0
Votes: 1
Uploaded: Sep 06, 2010 - 12:49:23 PM
Last Updated: Sep 06, 2010 - 02:28:48 PM Last Played: Jun 15, 2019 - 04:07:40 PM
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michaeljayklein said 3213 days ago (September 6th, 2010)
Nice job
You have a voice as smooth and sweet as honey and on great display here--you imbue a lot of personality into your vocal and that always merits high marks in my book! The song is very good! To be honest, I can tell you've only been studying the uke a short time here--there's several off moments with the instrument (mainly in the rhythm) but you'll master that thing fully in no time I'm sure and this is worth coming back and recording after getting a bit more proficient on the instrument. Keep up the fine work!
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Calchas said 3213 days ago (September 6th, 2010)
Hey! Nice song!
You have a lovely voice. I like the progression here behind the vocal melody. Ukulele seems an unusual choice, but in fact it works here.

Enjoyed!

Be well friend!

PS: I use a Snowball mic too...
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egobandit said 3212 days ago (September 7th, 2010)
Vocals!
Love the tone of your voice has a big sound reminds me of Natalie Merchant Very cool sounds like one take, great performance thanks for sharing this! I enjoyed!
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pablatone said 3204 days ago (September 15th, 2010)
good tune
I like it as it is, but if you wanted to add stuff, I'd try bass and I could hear a fiddle in there too.
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