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A Bottle on Your Head


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cwispas

 Genre: Rock & Roll

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Break a bottle on your head.
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Lyrics
Knew I liked the sun when you moved us to Vancouver
I wish that you were dead break a bottle on your head

You gave me a shove, thought that you were the prime mover
you got me seeing red break a bottle on your head

All my friends are back home/ can't reach them on the phone
When will I see them next /without them I'm a mess

All my friends are back home/ can't reach them on the phone
When will I see them next /cause without them I'm a mess

I used to be young now I'm old like Herbert Hoover
I wish we'd never wed break a bottle on your head

I think you're a stain and that I'm a stain remover
Come here and be cleansed break a bottle on your head


All my friends are back home/ can't reach them on the phone
When will I see them next /without them I'm a mess

All my friends are back home/ can't reach them on the phone
When will I see them next /cause without them I'm a mess
Song Stats
Hits: 1817
Comments: 6
Fans: 3
Plays: 38
Downloads: 44
Votes: 0
Uploaded: Oct 26, 2010 - 02:41:35 PM
Last Updated: Oct 26, 2010 - 02:51:51 PM Last Played: May 25, 2019 - 10:37:38 PM
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alackbass said 3225 days ago (October 26th, 2010)
A Bottle on Your Head
Tight little tune. I like the light and bouncy vibe. Clear mix. I'm not sure if the distorted vocals add to the overall production (just my opinion). But there's never any harm in experimentation (at least not in music production).
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rok41 said 3225 days ago (October 26th, 2010)
Bottle
Marty, this has a bit of potential if you can "open" it up dynamically. I love the bass line and the guitar mix reminds me a bit of Silversun. I think the vocals need to be a bit more out front with less "in the can" sound, but just my preference. You might try duping the vocal tract and panning one slightly left and one slightly right...copy and paste. Cool song.
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lank81 said 3225 days ago (October 26th, 2010)
The Guitar
Is great. I love the grungey tone, definitely my thing. I also enjoyed the Chorus, especially the vocal delivery. The verses for me could do without the heavily distorted vocals but that's just my taste. Also, the 2nd verse is delivered in a better manner than the 1st. Good stuff.
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tf10music said 3225 days ago (October 26th, 2010)
I found
myself getting very absorbed in this, you've created something that is very easy on the ears. This reminded me of a number of things, none of which I can name, except for Steppenwolf's 'Never Too Late,' which is a ong I adore. Nice work.
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dave_b said 3225 days ago (October 27th, 2010)
A Bottle on Your Head
Nice groove and the mix of sounds fills it out nicely. Like the fuzzy indie guitar. The hook and other lines in the lyric "I think you're a stain and that I'm a stain remover" add to the quirky vibe. Nice job!

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crissew said 3225 days ago (October 27th, 2010)
love songs like this
calm delivery of angry lyrics is very funny to me. Perhaps I am a bit strange... shocker there. This has a Fountains of Wayne type vibe to it. Great vibe and I actually kind of like the dirty mix for this style song.
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Name: Marty Kelly
Location: Maple Ridge British Columbia Canada
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