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a song i wrote about life and wanting more and never seeming to find it but tryin all the same.... btw missed the crazy house of mj's and all my friends and um maybe enemies lol.. hope ur all well :) btw any advice how to master the hissing sounds out of vocals grrr , i do use a $7 mic tho haha one of the ones with headphones and mic attached to it for msn kinda thing
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nevermine, sotory of my life, nevermine,
still ask myself sometimes, why why why

where did all of this go wrong, u feel so cold when your thinking on your own,
somethings always changing u as u move away, move away from me
i think you need time alone, u stand so strong, i'm out here on my own,
now i'm moving away will you think of me and how we used to be, how we used to be

and i tried so hard just to please u, to please u darling
now i try so hard to leave u, to leave u darling

i dont want to go, cant u see, dont wanna lose u

now it isnt meant to be cold the things i say tho u can push me away
all i ever wanted was to show you that i love u, guess its never enough
your so set in your ways, my life mistake was never ever wanting to change
beauty only comes from within and i wish you would see all the things that i see;
that i'm not the enemy when all i can see is everything we could be, happy together, a family,wish you'd believe in everything u could be


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Uploaded: Oct 27, 2010 - 10:50:54 PM
Last Updated: Mar 28, 2011 - 07:34:24 PM Last Played: Mar 19, 2019 - 05:47:40 PM
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ted23 said 3157 days ago (October 28th, 2010)
Easy rap
More reflective gentle kind of rap. Reminded me a bit if Everlast.
I like the vocal but I'd ease off on the vocal in the left channel so one vical line is more dominant than the other.
No enemies here but, keep your friends close and your enemies even closer eh? :)
nevermine said 3151 days ago (November 2nd, 2010)
tried your idea on my next song, think it does work better!!! just sooo hard using headphones to record and mix etc but thanks again hey...
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RosaLinda said 3157 days ago (October 28th, 2010)
Beautiful voice!
And good song! I liked it alot!!:)
I am the other way around keep your enemies FAR from you!:)
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nevermine said 3151 days ago (November 2nd, 2010)
yeah keeping them far from me believe me lol... thanks 4 ur comment
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RAVENS said 3156 days ago (October 28th, 2010)
Great Song
Nice to hear something new from you. This is a different style from what I've heard from you in the past. Sad lyrics, and very well sung. Great stuff!

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nevermine said 3151 days ago (November 2nd, 2010)
always value the feedback! Thought i'd try something different to what the norm for me is so am glad u liked it and yes sad lyrics like usual haha tho it works for rob thomas so why not lol
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lengold said 3155 days ago (October 29th, 2010)
Always love to
hear something new from you - like the mellowed feel.

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nevermine said 3151 days ago (November 2nd, 2010)
hey len
thanks, sorry i am not around alot, got no net on at home so only got the library lol... always love ur comments and advice... cheers :)
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CrazeeFlootGrrl said 3150 days ago (November 3rd, 2010)
tried so hard
Cool piece! Kinda gives a little bit of an Eminem vibe! It almost makes me think you should find some chick on MJ to sing the chorus, kinda like a Rihanna/Eminem "Love the Way You Lie" type of thing. Thanks for sharing!
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