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ok edited vox louder and changed drums a bit, its sooo hard thru headphones tho grrr any advice would be
awesome :)
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i've been waiting all this time
stood in line and got shoved behind
this time u might notice me
i will be the man u dreamed

and as u look upon me now
and watch me move on in the crowd
u took the thing i needed most
and played me like some stupid joke

u thought i'd never walk away
but after all this time and pain
i'm gonna live this on my own
theres something more to me i know

ch

and i'm sorry now but it's over now my love,guess its over now
are u sorry now that its over now my love, now its over now

v2
is it really over now?

all the times u smiled and played pretend, messed with my heart but u dont care
u use who u can to pick u up, again and you'll hate me now

but i see it again,everytime,your life'sfallin apart but u dont mind
but atleast i know i'll never be anything more to you, what were we meant to be?
what were we meant to be........

ch

and i'm sorry now, but it's over now my love,guess it's over now
are you sorry now, that its over now my love, now it's over now.........

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Uploaded: Nov 07, 2010 - 04:09:54 PM
Last Updated: Mar 28, 2011 - 07:38:51 PM Last Played: Jan 25, 2017 - 04:09:23 AM
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Sir Bass said 2756 days ago (November 8th, 2010)
Sweet
Tune nice rock voice.
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nevermine said 2756 days ago (November 8th, 2010)
thx
appreciate the time u took to listen sir :)
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lavalamp said 2756 days ago (November 8th, 2010)
Dig your stuff
RE: Advice- I like the dynamics and the sound of the drums. Maybe something different with the bass would give it that shine. But, great tune brother. I don't know why this isn't getting more play.

LL
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nevermine said 2756 days ago (November 8th, 2010)
hey :)
Thanks, i wil try to add bass from my keys... used a simple one cos got tired of it and lazy lol but ur right, it will give it a bit more ... thanks for ur comment and my songs dont tend to get alot of attention.. maybe its my reputation haha... love ya man
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dave_b said 2756 days ago (November 8th, 2010)
sory now edit
Gritty vocals work well on this mid tempo rocker, and the chugging crunchy guitar sounds good. I like the way the verse builds momentum through the drum part. However the song loses momentum into the chorus. I'd maybe try more dynamic chorus, and try to turn what you have now as the chorus into a bridge.
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nevermine said 2756 days ago (November 8th, 2010)
hey
i wil try that once i get motivation again lol cos will be good to see it restructured i think... always appreciate the feedback!!!!
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RAVENS said 2756 days ago (November 8th, 2010)
Awesome
Sad lyrics but one hec of an awesome song. Great vocals too, diggin' this!

RAVEN ;-)
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nevermine said 2756 days ago (November 8th, 2010)
hey
thanks!! Always nice to get a BIG compliment about songs cos it makes it a bit more worth the hard effort and the down times... and yes typical sad lyrics lol my trademark :)
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Kicbal said 2756 days ago (November 9th, 2010)
Tight
This sounds pretty good to me. Maybe the guitar could be a bit louder in the mix and eq'd with a bit less treble. Vocal effects work and the song structure is solid.
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nevermine said 2755 days ago (November 9th, 2010)
awesome
thanks..... so hard to get everything right but have a friend working on mastering it now so hopefully he can get all thee things right :/ lol.. thanks again
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lengold said 2755 days ago (November 9th, 2010)
Sounding great...
vocals are working much better. Great song.
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Len

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nevermine said 2755 days ago (November 9th, 2010)
hey
yeah thanks for the advice, was hard to tell if i'd turned them up enough but glad your happy with it :D ty again for ur advice!!!! (runs to fb)
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TERRAPLANE said 2754 days ago (November 10th, 2010)
has all the elements
to be a Rock hit,,, well done ,,T
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