MacJams.com - Song: Swim In Your Hair by lholden

MarkHolbrook	MarkHolbrook said 2924 days ago (February 15th, 2011)
	Love the vocals! Love the changes... unexpected and nice! One of the things I like about this is how less is more! You didn't try to layer in too much! Nicely done! Check out my latest song called Corn Whiskey

lholden	lholden said 2924 days ago (February 15th, 2011)
	Mark Thanks for stopping by to listen and for taking the time to write such lovely comments. I am just so pleased that you liked the song! Thanks again and all the best. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

KCsGROOVE	KCsGROOVE said 2924 days ago (February 15th, 2011)
	great title! Cool song with intriguing cordchanges, Laura! I really dig your harmonies! Just a fine, dreamy song! KC Check out my latest song called YOU DON'T KNOW

lholden	lholden said 2924 days ago (February 15th, 2011)
	KC Thanks for the really nice comments. I am so happy that the chord changes were likable and not too dissonant for your ears. The harmonies and actually the overall vocals were probably the most challenging I've 'heard' and tried to sing before so it's great that they worked for you:) Thanks again. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

sammydix	sammydix said 2924 days ago (February 15th, 2011)
	lh lh Gotta admit it was the song title alone that pulled me in at first. Sounded surreal, but the song wasn't. Was that a twist at the end? Best part of Swim for me as the second half of the chorus (Cause I wouldn't...) Loved that eerie chord prog and the phrasing you used with it. Lata (ethnic "later") :] Sam Check out my latest song called Mr. Tarver Revisited/Gra3ham

lholden	lholden said 2924 days ago (February 15th, 2011)
	Sam Thanks for the really nice comments. I appreciate that you liked the title and that the second half of the chorus worked for you. I was worried that it was a bit dissonant but always heard it that way. Thanks again, Sam. It's really cool for you to stop by and to take the time to write. All the best. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

Ren-Tin-10	Ren-Tin-10 said 2924 days ago (February 15th, 2011)
	I would have to admit... ...in my case it would be a VERY shallow swim. Intriguing title, great song! Thanks for sharing! Cheers, Jim Check out my latest song called (Re)Imagination Challenge - Hooked on Schubert

lholden	lholden said 2924 days ago (February 15th, 2011)
	Jim Thanks very much for stopping by... I am happy that you liked the title and the song:) All the best. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

DWL	DWL said 2924 days ago (February 15th, 2011)
	This is really nice Very well done. Lovely vocal work and very well played. Cheers Dick Check out my latest song called Fascist in my Soup

lholden	lholden said 2924 days ago (February 15th, 2011)
	Dick Thanks for your nice comments. I am really pleased that you liked the song:) It's great to share here at MJs. All the best. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

Loob	Loob said 2924 days ago (February 15th, 2011)
	Wow! Laurie this is great! You have such a beautiful voice and I love the arrangement and production on this! Check out my latest song called Chibbers For Bros ft jzsuperstar

lholden	lholden said 2924 days ago (February 15th, 2011)
	Loob Thank you so much for your positive comments. I am really pleased that you like the arrangement and production, as well as the vocals:) All the best. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

tokai	tokai said 2924 days ago (February 15th, 2011)
	swimming Lovely voice with exotic harmonies and a cool piano hook. Check out my latest song called sleeper

lholden	lholden said 2924 days ago (February 15th, 2011)
	Tokai Thanks so much for your nice comments. It's great to hear that you liked the piano... I never have really felt like I can play! Thanks again and all the best. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

Feter	Feter said 2924 days ago (February 15th, 2011)
	Swim In Your Hair You have a very sweet voice and so special ,sweet arrangement and lovely chords sequence ..I just like it ...good job !! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

lholden	lholden said 2924 days ago (February 15th, 2011)
	Feter Thank you very much for such nice words... encouragement means a lot! I am glad that the arrangement and chords word for you too. All the best. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

jiguma

jiguma said 2924 days ago (February 15th, 2011)

Laurie
The production here sounds great - you've obviously tried some new tricks since your last post. Great song - love the odd changes - terrific melodies and harmonies (have you been listening to SISTERS?) and nicely played piano.

Something to think about for your next post: light and shade in the song is not very well developed. By that I mean that everything kind of goes along at the same level - you can build lots of interest by bringing in and dropping out instruments. The obvious instrument parts I'd be looking at here are the drums/percussion loop which pretty much starts on the first bar and stay the same for the 4:15 duration. You have lots of scope in the percussion to add and remove parts. For example you could start with just congas and introduce the drums after the first verse - maybe leaving the tambourine until a chorus (to change the feel). The other thing you could do with the drums is to change loops to get different feels between the verses and chorus. To do all this of course, you'd need to find separate loops that only have tambo OR congas OR drums OR shakers (get what I mean?) and mix them up to provide variety.

Plan B might be to ask someone like Mike Watkins (kevmikwa) to do some live drums for you. I'd be happy to have a crack at them too (well, midi, not real drums).

I'm really impressed how you have taken suggestions on board and come up with obvious improvements in your sound. You know you can IM me if you want more ideas.

Cheers from Oz - it's so good to see your progress.
Neil

Check out my latest song called We End Up Being All The Same (42)

lholden

lholden said 2923 days ago (February 16th, 2011)

Neil
As always, I really appreciate your thoughtful comments. I continue to learn so much from you:) I was really happy to hear that you thought the production (and the piano and harmonies) sounded great - yippee, improvement! I did take all of the suggestions into account, following a much more step-by-step, organized approach to both recording and mixing/mastering. I agree that I can improve the light and shade in this song and will do so. Keep your eyes out for the remix. Thanks again, Neil. Off to work..

Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

alackbass	alackbass said 2924 days ago (February 15th, 2011)
	Swim In Your Hair Very nice pop song. I like the chord changes and vocal arrangement. Nice mix. Check out my latest song called Mean Miss Teacher

lholden	lholden said 2923 days ago (February 16th, 2011)
	Alackbass Hey, thank you so much for the nice comments. I am really glad that you enjoyed the song. It's funny because I never know which genre to pick for my songs so I always choose acoustic as my default! Thanks again for listening and commenting. All the best. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

PeterB7858	PeterB7858 said 2924 days ago (February 15th, 2011)
	Intriguing Intriguing lyrics set up an intriguing song. It doesn't quite flow like a conventional song but your strong vocals carry the day and give it real interest. Well done. Warm regards, Peter. Check out my latest song called The Parting Of The Ways

lholden

lholden said 2923 days ago (February 16th, 2011)

Peter
Thank you very much for your thoughtful comments. I'd agree that this song doesn't really fit a conventional, predictable pattern. I always heard the melody and chords as they are here, rather odd even in some places. Because of this, it was probably also the hardest melody I've ever tried to sing! So, I am really happy that you thought the vocals were strong:) Thanks again. All the best.

Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

neilh79	neilh79 said 2924 days ago (February 15th, 2011)
	swim in your hair lovely piece of music just by itself. The vocal is really nice, love the lyrics. Well done! Check out my latest song called Resurrection of Life Final Mix! (w/ Loob, Rok41, Symphony101, Gadzooks)

lholden	lholden said 2923 days ago (February 16th, 2011)
	Neilh79 Thank you so much for your really nice comments. I am so glad that you liked the song! It's great to hear such positive feedback. Thanks. All the best. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

michaeljayklein	michaeljayklein said 2924 days ago (February 15th, 2011)
	Lovely song... ...and such a beautiful voice too! I liked this to the extreme Laura--you sold me the song like a pro! Thanks again! Michael Check out my latest song called There Ain't Nobody Here but Us Chickens!

lholden	lholden said 2923 days ago (February 16th, 2011)
	Michael Thank you very much for taking the time to listen and comment. I really appreciate that you liked Swim in Your Hair. Thanks again and all the best! Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

jdholliday	jdholliday said 2923 days ago (February 15th, 2011)
	wow, great vocal! Dramatic improvrment in your arrangement and production, listen to the wise one, Jiguma, he's a wealth of knowledge! Check out my latest song called Please Help, Pride of NYC needs tracks!

lholden	lholden said 2923 days ago (February 16th, 2011)
	jdholliday It's so lovely to hear that you think the production and arrangement is improving:) I have to give great thanks to Neil (Jiguma) for all of the help has has given me of late and in the past. Thanks again for stopping by to listen and comment. All the best. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

Vic Holman	Vic Holman said 2923 days ago (February 15th, 2011)
	swim in your hair excellent song. great progression & voc's. the piano lines really fill out this tune nicely. Check out my latest song called Feeding The Sharks

lholden	lholden said 2923 days ago (February 16th, 2011)
	Vic Thanks very much for the nice comments. I was worried about my piano playing, or lack of skill on the piano, so it's great to hear that you think the piano lines help to fill the tune out nicely. I appreciate that you took the time to listen and comment. Thanks again. All the best. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

	telecaster29 said 2923 days ago (February 15th, 2011)
	very fine harmonies and accomplished songwriting and performance. some novel mental images suggested by the lyrics {rivers of salt, swimming in hair}. Check out my latest song called inner space

lholden	lholden said 2923 days ago (February 16th, 2011)
	Telecaster29 Hey, thank you very much for such nice comments. I am so happy that you enjoyed the lyrics and could imagine some of the images there. It's really nice of you to take the time to listen and write. Thanks again. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

thetiler	thetiler said 2923 days ago (February 16th, 2011)
	like the sound of your voice her. Nice beat comin out of the shoot and the high tones of your voice are nice. Again way to go in the voice of your, you gotta nice natural voice. Cool gift to have I think! Thanks for sharing ! Check out my latest song called They Went Underground

lholden	lholden said 2923 days ago (February 16th, 2011)
	Thetiler Thank you so much for your very kind comments. I really love singing and am so happy that I stuck with it, trying and learning, since I only started singing as an adult. It's great to have such positive feedback. Thanks again. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

billykirsch	billykirsch said 2923 days ago (February 16th, 2011)
	Laura Love the jazzy chord changes in the piano here and there. And your voice sounds very relaxed and confident. Keep it going! Check out my latest song called Everything

lholden	lholden said 2923 days ago (February 16th, 2011)
	Billykirsch Is Kirsch your last name? Thank you very much for your nice comments. It's great to hear that my voice comes off as relaxed and confident, as I usually feel far from confident while recording:) Thanks and all the best to you. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

Char	Char said 2923 days ago (February 16th, 2011)
	Nice, jazzy and bright vocal that goes with the bouncy tune. Thanks. Check out my latest song called Bound, v2. w Music by Dirigent

lholden	lholden said 2923 days ago (February 16th, 2011)
	Char Thank you so much for these nice comments. I am really happy that you liked the tune. Thanks again for stopping by for a listen and taking the time to write a comment:) All the best. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

mrattue	mrattue said 2923 days ago (February 16th, 2011)
	Different Sad Strange juxtaposition of backing mood (quite jaunty?) with the intense sadness of the lyrics, makes an interesting and quite unexpected mix. Hints at layers of meaning that the lyrics don't quite reveal. As always, lovely vocals, nice harmonies, and very together and well produced. Enjoyed it. Thank you. Marc Check out my latest song called Second Wind

lholden

lholden said 2923 days ago (February 16th, 2011)

Marc
Thank you kindly for your thoughtful comments. You picked up on layers.. very observant, Marc. I would most certainly say that there were many, many emotional layers for me during this experience. It's good to hear that the backing wasn't too jaunty - that it made for an interesting and not annoying mix. Thanks again for listening and taking the time to comment. It is much appreciated. All the best.

Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

magnatone	magnatone said 2923 days ago (February 16th, 2011)
	Swim In Your Hair Hey Laura - wow, this is really great! love the piano in here - are you still doing that on your computer keyboard? if so - double wow (because that's really hard!!) I LOVE the title of this, and you've got some great lyrics, great delivery, harmonies and chord changes that are very cool! great work! Check out my latest song called Hallelujah (Leonard Cohen) and Variations

lholden

lholden said 2923 days ago (February 16th, 2011)

Magnatone
Thank you very much for your lovely, supportive, positive comments. I really appreciate this support and am simply so happy that you enjoyed the song. I did, in fact, record the piano on my new Yamaha Electric Piano:) It's much easier than the keyboard - I agree!! I am still really learning on the piano, so it's great to hear that you liked it! Thanks again and all the best.

Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

Six-Nail-Coffin	Six-Nail-Coffin said 2923 days ago (February 16th, 2011)
	Restrained Let yourself go! The vocals were beautiful but I can't help feeling that you really wanted to let loose on some of them. Great song, love the lounge-y bebop vibe. Check out my latest song called Krampus Carol

lholden

lholden said 2922 days ago (February 17th, 2011)

TheDanseLeviathan
Thank you very much for your nice comments. It's true that I wish that I had the skill to really belt it out in TUNE:) The melody was actually very difficult to sing - kicking myself for thinking up a melody that starts on the 2nd of the chord so often! This meant that I had to take care (and a lot of attempts) to get everything in tune. Glad that you liked the song:) Thanks for taking the time to listen and write.

Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

jodyrush	jodyrush said 2923 days ago (February 16th, 2011)
	Wonderful! Laura, This is really nice! Check out my latest song called Forbidden Fruit

lholden	lholden said 2922 days ago (February 17th, 2011)
	Jodyrush Thank you very much for your kind support. I am thrilled that you enjoyed listening:) Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

egobandit	egobandit said 2922 days ago (February 16th, 2011)
	Cool vibe sounds almost Godspellish, Very beautiful changes, The tone in your voice suits this to the tee Very beautiful! Check out my latest song called No more demands

lholden	lholden said 2922 days ago (February 17th, 2011)
	Egobandit Thank you for having a listen and taking the time to write:) I really appreciate that you enjoyed the tone of the vocals. As I have said in other replies, this one really challenged me vocal wise... Thanks again and all the best! Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

RAVENS	RAVENS said 2922 days ago (February 16th, 2011)
	Awesome Oh this was so pretty. Your voice reminds me of Dido on this. Lovely, looking forward to your next piece! RAVEN ;-) Check out my latest song called Tattooed Scars (w/ Sigmund, Scofugate, Rok41)

lholden	lholden said 2922 days ago (February 17th, 2011)
	Ravens Thank you very much for your supportive comments... it means a lot of hear that you liked the song. Take care and thanks again. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

hackneybloke	hackneybloke said 2922 days ago (February 17th, 2011)
	swim hi laura you have elements of joni mitchell going on (i am a big joni fan). you also steer away from the conventional chord progressions which i like....and when you really sing out your voice really shines. great mix too. Check out my latest song called If Symptoms Persist

lholden	lholden said 2922 days ago (February 17th, 2011)
	Hackneyblock Thank you very much for your thoughtful comments. Yes, this one does have a bit less conventional chord progressions and it's great to hear that you liked the vocals in the stronger parts, as well as the mix. I am still learning about mixing. Thanks again and all the best. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

drakonis

drakonis said 2922 days ago (February 17th, 2011)

Hey, listen to this!
Nice clean mix here, and your singing fits in but is strident and doesn't get lost, the harmony singing is perfectly "backgroundified" there, you got the "stereo-spread" trick to work perfectly here.

The drums seem a little "persistent" through this, perhaps create several "loops", some more "busy" than others, and add the busy versions during the chorus, and a very sparse one just at the intro, and maybe lower the overall drum track volume, and don't pan the different percussion instruments quite so far apart... just some more minor ideas.

Overall a fun flowing song that hides a darker message in the lyrics.

ttfn,
Drakonis

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lholden

lholden said 2922 days ago (February 17th, 2011)

Drakonis
As usual, you have given me some very useful advice here. I agree with both you and Jiguma that the drum tracks are too persistent throughout. At the beginning, I liked this, but have started playing with different loops, moving things about and the results are very positive. Hopefully, you will see a remix posted soon with updated, more varied drum tracks. Btw, do you find the vocals too 'strident'? It's so exciting to hear that the background vocals blend well here. Thanks again for your help. All the best.

Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

drakonis	drakonis said 2922 days ago (February 17th, 2011)
	Your Vocals? Too Strident? Nope. That was a compliment, I do NOT like muddy incomprehensible singing (which is one reason why I don't sing :-) ... everything was quite clear, which I liked. Check out my latest song called Miwok

lholden	lholden said 2922 days ago (February 17th, 2011)
	great Thanks... I am glad that the vocals sound good to you:) Thanks again. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

Mosaica	Mosaica said 2921 days ago (February 18th, 2011)
	I'm glad I found this! Like others say, the chord changes make this a very original and sophisticated composition. Lovely work. Check out my latest song called Repercussion

lholden	lholden said 2920 days ago (February 19th, 2011)
	Mosaica Thank you very much for you kind comments. I am really happy that you like the song:) All the best. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

awigze	awigze said 2920 days ago (February 18th, 2011)
	Laura been meaning to hear more of your projects and glad to hear this one. Very cool. Thanks for sharing this talent and vision of music that you have. Check out my latest song called If You Can Hang On by Outtaorbit

lholden	lholden said 2920 days ago (February 19th, 2011)
	Awigze Thank you very much for listening and commenting. It means a lot to have such wonderful encouragement and support. Thanks again! All the best. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

papag	papag said 2919 days ago (February 20th, 2011)
	took a dip simply lovely. I really like your piano and voice in this one. Your mix is pretty clean to my ears too...sweet stuff. I hope you make your "final" version download friendly. Check out my latest song called Nowhere to Feel Safe

lholden	lholden said 2918 days ago (February 21st, 2011)
	Papag Hey, thank you very much for the nice comments. It is so lovely to hear that you liked Swim in Your Hair. I actually don't know how to make the song downloadable in the creative commons license thing. Thanks again for taking the time to listen and comment! Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

pablatone	pablatone said 2915 days ago (February 24th, 2011)
	nice tune the whole thing kinda swims along. I like the way vocals aren't very predictable in the note selection, there were quite a few places where I didn't expect the direction you went and the choice you made was the perfect one. Good job. Check out my latest song called Nathan Browne

lholden	lholden said 2915 days ago (February 24th, 2011)
	Pablatone Thank you very much for taking the time to listen and comment. I am really pleased that you liked the song and found the unpredictable melody to work for your ears:) All the best. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

airportseven	airportseven said 2915 days ago (February 24th, 2011)
	Wear have I been ? This is great - you're great. Major talent working all over this. Excellent vocals and layering. Real nice piano playing too - and a solid rhythm section. Adds up to a hit in my book. Check out my latest song called 4.22.13 first thing

lholden	lholden said 2914 days ago (February 25th, 2011)
	airportseven Thank you very much for your really kind comments. I am happy that you had a chance to stop by and listen and it's nice of you to take the time to comment:) It's especially nice to hear that you liked the piano sound as I am not a very confident player - just a messer, really! Thanks again. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

davisamerica	davisamerica said 2915 days ago (February 24th, 2011)
	wow.... this is nice ..... really reminds me ...vocal wise of carol king .... great track Laura. Check out my latest song called ok char2(Vic and Flatrock mix)

lholden	lholden said 2914 days ago (February 25th, 2011)
	davisamerica Thank you for your nice comments. I am happy that you liked the song! All the best:) Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

Hydrogen3	Hydrogen3 said 2913 days ago (February 25th, 2011)
	interesting name for a song lovely vocals/ keyboards and arrangement. not what I expected with the title. very nice arrangement overall :) Check out my latest song called Blindsided

lholden	lholden said 2913 days ago (February 26th, 2011)
	hydrogen3 Thank you very much for your nice comments. I am glad that you liked the song:) Did you expect the song to be more abstract by the name? It's interesting to know... Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

apb

apb said 2913 days ago (February 26th, 2011)

Laura
like Neil I feel you've somehow morphed into Ann Cozean .. 8o. how did that happen? lol .. anyways, great singing/harmonies: my only nit is to avoid the temptation to throw in 1 bongo drum loop and repeat it for the entire song... something I have done myself.... it does get tiresome and distracts you from all the nice variety going on elsewhere.

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lholden

lholden said 2913 days ago (February 26th, 2011)

apb
Thank you for your thoughtful comments. On this song, I really wanted harmonies, but found it difficult to hear them. This meant that I picked them out on the keyboard and they turned out to be best when in three-part harmony. Maybe Anne uses three- part harmonies often? Funny! I agree about the percussion. There is actually another drum loop that comes in on the chorus, but it's hard to hear the difference:) I will re-do the drums and repost soon... thanks again for your comments. I am happy that you liked the singing/harmonies. All the best.

Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

particledots	particledots said 2913 days ago (February 26th, 2011)
	you have a beautiful voice thank you Check out my latest song called I caught my scarf in the sputnik

lholden	lholden said 2913 days ago (February 26th, 2011)
	particledots Thank you very much for your kind comments. I am glad that you liked the vocals:) All the best. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

speedonl	speedonl said 2913 days ago (February 26th, 2011)
	Very well arranged and a good listen, kudos!! Check out my latest song called Plane

lholden	lholden said 2912 days ago (February 27th, 2011)
	speedonl Thank you for stopping by to listen and comment. I am happy that you enjoyed the song. All the best. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

dreadmon	dreadmon said 2912 days ago (February 26th, 2011)
	Nice colors I really enjoyed the progressions and your vocals - reminded me of Carole King in timbre, but the changes are unconventional and truly delightful. Check out my latest song called Don't You

lholden	lholden said 2912 days ago (February 27th, 2011)
	dreadmon Thank you very much for your nice comments. I am delighted that you liked the changes and the song in general. All the best and thanks again. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

Soundhound	Soundhound said 2910 days ago (March 1st, 2011)
	good song.... I like the way you put this together, I also can hear your vocal potential keep doing what your doing.... :-) Check out my latest song called Melded Universe....

lholden	lholden said 2909 days ago (March 2nd, 2011)
	Soundhound Thank you very much for stopping by to listen... I really appreciate your nice comments. All the best! Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

DeathArrow	DeathArrow said 2903 days ago (March 8th, 2011)
	lalala what a lovely song, melody and voice! i like the backings in the chorus they remind me a lot of country songs haha and i LOVE LOVE LOVE your singing in the 2nd verse "you were leaving" and "blind" so much expression and power it's unbelievable. i totally fell in love with your voice :) cheers! Check out my latest song called Ghost

lholden	lholden said 2901 days ago (March 10th, 2011)
	DeathArrow Thank you so much for stopping by to listen and post such supportive, nice comments. I am really happy that you liked the singing in the second verse. I wanted for it to be different from the first to portray a stronger emotion. Thanks again and all the best! Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

Leon	Leon said 2902 days ago (March 9th, 2011)
	Your voice... has the clarity and directness that stands out and complements the clean background music. Your harmonies are sexy and soothing as they ride the smooth flow of the song. I gotta listen to your other songs. Check out my latest song called Just Another Day

lholden	lholden said 2901 days ago (March 10th, 2011)
	Leon Thank you very much for such nice comments. I am especially pleased that you like the vocals since I really love your voice too!! All the best and thanks again. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

tonestones	tonestones said 2900 days ago (March 11th, 2011)
	Swimming Your voice sounds great. very smooth I like the song. Great tune. Check out my latest song called Stairway to Heaven (LZ Cover)

lholden	lholden said 2900 days ago (March 11th, 2011)
	Tonestones Thanks for your kind comments. I am really happy that you liked the vocals and song in general. Thanks again and all the best. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

Peter_Lauber	Peter_Lauber said 2900 days ago (March 11th, 2011)
	you have a lovely voice laura i am happy i stopped by Check out my latest song called Bella Amore

lholden	lholden said 2900 days ago (March 11th, 2011)
	Peter Thank you for stopping by and for the really nice comment. I am happy that you liked the vocals:) All the best to you. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

Garni	Garni said 2900 days ago (March 11th, 2011)
	Beautiful work Enjoyed this very much, your vocals are so good, harmonies working so well too! G-) Check out my latest song called Where Did The Sun Go with Lokka

lholden	lholden said 2900 days ago (March 11th, 2011)
	Garni Thank you very much for your nice comments. I am glad that you took time to stop by, have a listen and write a comment:) All the best. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

richard13	richard13 said 2900 days ago (March 11th, 2011)
	Nice! Cool title, lovely voice. Thanks. Check out my latest song called one last night with you

lholden	lholden said 2900 days ago (March 11th, 2011)
	Richard Thank you very much for your nice comments! I really appreciate that you took the time to stop by for a listen. All the best. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

dave_b	dave_b said 2899 days ago (March 11th, 2011)
	Swim In Your Hair Nice jazzy changes. I really liked the vocals and harmonies. "Swim in your hair" is a strong, original hook. Check out my latest song called Llarions Blues

lholden	lholden said 2899 days ago (March 12th, 2011)
	Dave Thank you very much for your nice comments. I am happy that you enjoyed the listen and thanks for taking the time to comment. All the best! Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

ktb	ktb said 2899 days ago (March 12th, 2011)
	Swim In Your Hair delightful changes and your voice is lovely. Thought the harmonies worked well and really enhanced the tune. Nice delicate touch on the keys...shades of basia Check out my latest song called Blackwater (by Tokai)

lholden	lholden said 2898 days ago (March 13th, 2011)
	ktb Thank you very much for your kind, supportive comments. I am happy that you enjoyed this song. All the best to you! Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

VicDiesel	VicDiesel said 2889 days ago (March 22nd, 2011)
	Great stuff What a cool song! Fresh chords, and great vocals. Muchly enjoyed. Check out my latest song called Ten minutes

lholden	lholden said 2889 days ago (March 22nd, 2011)
	VicDiesel Thank you for stopping by to have a listen and comment. I really appreciate your kind support:) I am currently working on a remix with live drums by Loop here at MacJams... looking forward to the remix to post too. Thanks again. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

Symphony101	Symphony101 said 2878 days ago (April 2nd, 2011)
	Beautiful ! Fantastic vocals, very pleasant listen. Check out my latest song called Standing On The Brink (w/ Mosaica)

lholden	lholden said 2865 days ago (April 15th, 2011)
	Symphony101 Thank you very much for your kind comments! I am happy that you enjoyed the listen:) All the best. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

JBurns	JBurns said 2865 days ago (April 15th, 2011)
	imagery You have interesting imagery and texture going on here, thanks for sharing Check out my latest song called Healing Heart

lholden	lholden said 2862 days ago (April 18th, 2011)
	JBurns Thank you very much... I am happy that you enjoyed the images. I really appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment. All the best to you. Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

lyzak	lyzak said 2864 days ago (April 15th, 2011)
	pleasurable listening It's evident you love to sing, Laura. Lyrics float on a simple, beautiful piano accompaniment. My own opinion is that, a human drummer would be sublime. A joy to listen to! Is it available somewhere? good wishes, greg Check out my latest song called Playful Al with A-man

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lholden said 2862 days ago (April 18th, 2011)

lyzak
Thank you very much. I do love to sing, it's true. The human drummer version is going to be posted very soon!! Loob has done the drums for me, as well as adding violin, cello and guitar. I am so excited about the outcome. You'll hear it soon. I am just a hobbiest really, so the song is only here for fun. Thanks again for your kind and supportive comments.

Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

RichardSchletty	RichardSchletty said 2864 days ago (April 15th, 2011)
	Swimmingly I like your voice. The song could benefit by less velocity in the piano notes. I recommend adding acoustic guitar strumming and maybe a fiddle. Check out my latest song called God Is on the Scene

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lholden said 2862 days ago (April 18th, 2011)

RichardSchletty
Thank you kindly for your helpful suggestions. I am excited that I should be able to post the updated version soon. I have been working with Loob who has added acoustic guitar sounds, violin, cello and live drums. The various layers really add - can't wait to post it when it's ready. Thanks again for stopping by to listen and comment. All the best.

Check out my latest song called If Only We Could

Jerry_Quinn	Jerry_Quinn said 2860 days ago (April 20th, 2011)
	Swim In Your Hair Mmmm. Like your lyrics. Like the piano and the conga loop. Love your voice! Check out my latest song called I Had a Dream Last Night w/ alackbass & ktb

lholden	lholden said 2844 days ago (May 6th, 2011)
	Jerry Thank you very much for taking the time to listen and comment. I am happy that you like this song:) Check out my latest song called If Only We Could