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The Way You Call Me C


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Cheesecube

 Genre: Acoustic
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I wrote this song several months ago. It's one of the most personal things I have ever made public. It's a work in progress. I'm still changing a lot about it, so please leave feedback/constructive criticism
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You found me when I was just 18
I was so unsure of what would be
I thought that I had finally seen the light
The light that they call love
That night
I asked if I could get from you one kiss
I thought that I would miss this for the rest of my life
Who'd have ever guessed I'd be right
Who'd have ever guessed that you would break my heart that night
Who'd have ever guessed you'd break my heart.

I hopped a plane thinking you would do the same
I gave you everything I could
I thought that you'd be good to me
I miss the way you used to say my name
before you were so cold;
Before you were so strange
You used to be so strong
You used to be so sure
You said that we belonged together,
But not anymore.
Don't tell me that you miss me anymore.
Please don't tell me that you miss me anymore.

I used to think that you and I would live
together in one room and sleep
together in one bed.
Now I sit and wonder where you are
I wonder how you've been
and how you got so far away from me
But once upon a letter
And once upon a laugh
Once the words were spoken
I want your bad romance
Forts are not a shelter to hide out from your lies
While your uniform is perfect, I still see through your disguise
Uncle sam is watching from the fighter jets above
While I'm glad your dad is proud; What's the price of your first love?
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Uploaded: Mar 27, 2011 - 08:25:13 PM
Last Updated: Mar 27, 2011 - 08:25:13 PM Last Played: Jul 31, 2019 - 11:48:07 PM
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papag said 3123 days ago (March 28th, 2011)
The Way
I like the feel of the song. It works as a uke tune but it feels like it could also have a bigger acoustic band kind of mix. Your emotional curve in the tune works for me and I think you could repeat the killer hook "what's the price of your first love" several times at the end to emphasize your point.

Thanks for the download :)
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