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Hmmm, I started writing lyrics to kind of set the tone of the song but I don't have a good singing voice so I guess it doesn't matter. Everything is done by me, no loops or anything used, I don't know if thats good or bad haha, let me know what you think and what I can do to improve. The hardest thing for me is not having anyone to help me or to ask if what I'm making sounds ok. *Sending this song to itunes to put it on here took a lot out of the quality, I don't know why because it's set to the best settings.
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Uploaded: Apr 29, 2011 - 11:11:34 PM
Last Updated: May 07, 2011 - 09:37:00 PM Last Played: Jun 03, 2019 - 09:08:32 PM
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johnwhitehead said 3040 days ago (April 29th, 2011)
Savior
A lot of cool ideas and musicianship on display here.Some great guitar shredding, too. I'm an old fogie/folkie and not generally into distorted guitars, but your arrangement with various synths kept me interested. You should totally have a band--start your own if you can't find one. Keep postin' here, too.
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LukeJL said 3039 days ago (April 30th, 2011)
Thanks!
I'm going to eventually start a band, I've been looking for people my age to get one going
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Reggie_Pole said 3039 days ago (April 30th, 2011)
Another fogey comment
I'm an old fogey (which is the proper spelling -- I should know) and I'm totally into distorted guitars. Yours sound big and bad. Fine composition and arrangement. Nice work.
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LukeJL said 3039 days ago (April 30th, 2011)
Thanks for the comment
I had to do a lot of work on the guitars to make them sound fairly good since I don't have a recording mic
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gail60 said 3036 days ago (May 3rd, 2011)
this is too cool
You have tons of talent and I hope you will continue using it. This is an awesome rocker and I am impressed that it is all you. Keep up the great work and your day of success will come.
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LukeJL said 3035 days ago (May 4th, 2011)
Thanks!
Thanks for listening I'm glad you liked it
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falcef said 3033 days ago (May 6th, 2011)
Your Savior
A Luke rock art song and guitar distorsion beauty Harmonic accord? list please? Bye
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LukeJL said 3033 days ago (May 6th, 2011)
List?
What kind of list?
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egobandit said 3032 days ago (May 7th, 2011)
it matters
Love that there are no loops here, the piano stabs in the background really separate the sounds in this, the heavy guitar the breaks where it all goes quite classic top notch!
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LukeJL said 3032 days ago (May 7th, 2011)
I'm happy you think it matters
I'm really trying here, trying to figure out producing/recording and everything, Thanks!
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alackbass said 3032 days ago (May 7th, 2011)
Your Savior
I love the heavy riffs and guitar sounds. And there's a lot of cool stuff happening with the keyboard textures and lines. So the composition is strong, as is the guitar playing.

I would move the heavy rhythm guitars farther out to both the left and right. Give it a thick rhythm that surrounds the listener. I would also bring the drums out (louder and more bottom end) and put some reverb on them (make them metal band big).
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LukeJL said 3032 days ago (May 7th, 2011)
Thanks
I'm glad the composition is strong lol. The whole thing with panning the guitars, well I did - as far to the right and left as I can in garageband - 63 left, 63 right on 2 separate tracks, and I don't get that rhythm guitar surround like I'm trying to, can anyone tell me why? Is it because I have no real recording gear? I tried everything I could in GB
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papag said 3032 days ago (May 7th, 2011)
rock on the edge
this one has potential. If you keep making tracks like this you should be able to get some folks to collaborate with you...no prob. You have some sweet hooks in here...I gotta listen to it on monitors to really hear the mix.

I wish I could download this :(
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LukeJL said 3032 days ago (May 7th, 2011)
Cool
I just hope you don't hear to much bass in your monitors, I listened to it through my dad's more expensive speakers and it was to bassy, not what I hear in my headphones. I guess it isn't able to be downloaded? I will see if I can change that
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