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The Last Time


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 Genre: Pop (mainstream)
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I wanted to try making a marketable song for fun. And here it is.
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Lyrics
I'm counting backwards
in time for tomorrow
my little rituals
get me through

I brush my teeth
ten times or until
my gums start bleeding
now i'm ready for you to cross my lines

i fall into in my waking existence
I've done my duties I've done my overtime
there's a void in my throat, as i think of all the blood i've wasted, you're never putting out
I'm gonna keep it in mind

This is the last time
i'll be in trouble
This is the last time
you'll hear my heresies
You'll never hear
another word from me
I'll keep my head down and proceed
in a silent stride

I will remember a numerical sequence
as I take subsistence down the hatch
it's all I can do to keep myself together
in my metastable circumstance

This is the last time
i'll be in trouble
This is the last time
you'll hear my heresies
You'll never hear
another word from me about it
I'll keep my head down and proceed
in a silent stride

I think I have been giving all I can
but i don't think it matters honey
I don't think it affects you honey
I don't think it's

the last time
the last time

This is the last time
you'll slap my wrists
this is the last time
I'll hear it from you
there's a thunder rising
in a coma but waking
did you see this coming
a wildfire spreading
you won't have my time of day
gonna let this boulder roll on down
Song Stats
Hits: 2213
Comments: 10
Fans: 10
Plays: 49
Downloads: 45
Votes: 0
Uploaded: Jul 05, 2011 - 10:46:48 AM
Last Updated: Jul 05, 2011 - 10:48:40 AM Last Played: Apr 15, 2019 - 03:11:06 AM
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Comments
davisamerica said 2910 days ago (July 6th, 2011)
3 downloads and no comments??
... well that is wacked. Really nicely structured track. solid lyrics and vocals .... downloaded.
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apb said 2910 days ago (July 6th, 2011)
Oooh
I hear a little Joan Armatrading/Tracy Chapman style in the vocals (mostly delivery) and great vocals they are. Very boy band dance beat .. catchy... with some Ben Folds too in the piano style. Altogether .. nice work.
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falcef said 2908 days ago (July 8th, 2011)
The Last Time
Salve a song very nice rithmic fusion and voice suadent. Bye from Italy
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egobandit said 2907 days ago (July 8th, 2011)
never puttin out
its upbeat but very dark, I like the way you phrase your singing, the circumstance buildup was a very cool surprise, maketable as long as you had fun ! Enjoyed!
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PaulaMunk said 2906 days ago (July 9th, 2011)
liked
your delivery. Nice, catchy tune. Thanks.
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Soundhound said 2906 days ago (July 10th, 2011)
A good song....
Has style originality and your vocals are top shelf.....

Very well done.....I......LIKE IT.......
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alackbass said 2906 days ago (July 10th, 2011)
The Last Time
Great vocals and a very well written tune. Nice arrangement. The mix is quite good too.
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modalgrooveman said 2906 days ago (July 10th, 2011)
very infectious!
I like your vocals here, and I think that there is a definite addictive quality to the song as a whole. Seductive is another apt term: all great pop songs have this, at least to me.
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magnatone said 2906 days ago (July 10th, 2011)
The Last Time
i am becoming a true fan cy! this is cool in so many ways. i love your vocals and these lyrics are terrific - great job!
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mowguy3 said 2905 days ago (July 10th, 2011)
The Last Time
Well, Mission accomplished...marketable..I think so. Nice track for sure.Thanks..
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