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A Disconnect


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Moses

 Genre: Acoustic
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Went to NYC to try to win the heart of a girl/friend I realized I was in love with. Really didn't think no would be the answer to the depth and purity of love I was offering. There's a disconnect.

The bridge is quite makeshift, didn't have any creative ideas for that part yet.
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Lyrics
There's a disconnect
Between you and I
I can't explain it
And no matter how hard I try
to relate to you I can't pass this borderline

So there's this story.
I'm on one page.
Are you waiting for me?
Or don't you feel the same?
Is it really just that I don't have acclaim?

I guess I misunderstood you!
thought all you wanted was love.
But that's clearly not the case
You've got mine and you look the other way.
I predicted this wrong.
My love's not undeniable.
Oh this love I can't control
I can't have you and it's eating at my soul

Yeah this disconnect
Keeps us apart
You must think that I'm lying to myself
When I pour out my heart
If you don't believe me now should I hope that you'll start?

Maybe one day it will all be clear
You will realize that with me there's no fear
But I'm not getting younger, damn the constraints of time
Every day that passes shrinks the chance that you'll be mine
I just have to move on.
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Downloads: 35
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Uploaded: Apr 26, 2012 - 01:58:06 PM
Last Updated: Apr 26, 2012 - 01:58:06 PM Last Played: Oct 11, 2018 - 04:52:29 PM
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Comments
carbon said 2425 days ago (April 26th, 2012)
disconnect
i dig. the sentiment is universal and the vox are terrific. thanks for sharing this.
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Moses said 2425 days ago (April 27th, 2012)
thanks
thanks carbon glad you enjoyed it ;-)
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PeterB7858 said 2425 days ago (April 27th, 2012)
Good song, well sung
Fantastic work, Noah. Really like the simplicity and stripped back nature of this. You have a fine voice and you have written a very good song. I think the song structure is very good as is. I enjoyed listening to this very much. Possibly the very end is a bit anti-climatic? Perhaps consider finishing up and octave and running the chord progression through? Just a thought. Thanks for the download, Peter.
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Moses said 2425 days ago (April 27th, 2012)
thanks peter
appreciate the feedback, i'm still working out exactly how i want the structure so that is helpful. thanks again and glad you enjoyed it!
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Philip18 said 2425 days ago (April 27th, 2012)
A disconnect
Nice rhythm on the guitar strumming. Plenty of emotion in the vocal. Well-written lyrics. I like it!
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Moses said 2425 days ago (April 27th, 2012)
thanks philip
appreciate your words, pleased you like it!
Check out my latest song called The Grinch
gadzooks said 2425 days ago (April 27th, 2012)
A Disconnect
Real nice tune ... enjoy your vocal style ... lots of feel ... Ben Harper-ish ...interesting chord progression. Enjoyed your lyrics.
Cheers
SG
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Moses said 2425 days ago (April 27th, 2012)
thank you gadzooks
i do enjoy some ben harper, he's impacted my style for sure. glad you enjoyed my song!
Check out my latest song called The Grinch
neilh79 said 2424 days ago (April 28th, 2012)
A Disconnect
This has a really nice feel to it. Bit Jack Johnson in style which is no bad thing! Cracking vocal
Moses said 2424 days ago (April 28th, 2012)
thx neil ;-)
jack johnson is another big influence on me! thanks for checking in
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KCsGROOVE said 2424 days ago (April 28th, 2012)
disconnect
Fine songwriting and performance
heartfelt song
Enjoyed!
KC
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Moses said 2424 days ago (April 28th, 2012)
thanks kc
thanks for checkin in, glad you enjoyed it ;-)
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DWL said 2422 days ago (April 30th, 2012)
Direct and effective
I really like the vocals and lyrics.

I don't know if you do it deliberately but you start almost apologetically and grow stronger during the song. It works.

Cheers

Dick


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Moses said 2226 days ago (November 12th, 2012)
thanks dick
I did not do that deliberately, which is really cool!
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