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mahler24

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need some input on this...any criticism is much appreciated
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Comments: 10
Fans: 7
Plays: 36
Downloads: 0
Votes: 1
Uploaded: Jun 06, 2012 - 02:37:15 PM
Last Updated: Jun 06, 2012 - 02:37:15 PM Last Played: Jul 10, 2019 - 11:42:51 PM
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mana_junkie said 2598 days ago (June 6th, 2012)
NIN
Very weird and very cool. Industrial Electronica vibe with a NiN feel to it. I like it.
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carbon said 2598 days ago (June 6th, 2012)
rue
i agree with mana - all kinds of weird. but i love weird. that breakdown at 1:39 and the soothing vocal that follows work magic. that you singing? a pity no download.
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davajonah said 2598 days ago (June 7th, 2012)
Yup
Quirky and definitely an industrial feel to this. I agree about the breakdown, really nice bringing the vocal to the fore with those soothing synths contrasting the jarring percussion. The vocal sounds like Jim Morrison! You could do with making this a bit longer I would say, develop those really nice string sounds that float about in the background. They are really nice. I too would have downloaded this!
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Mosaica said 2598 days ago (June 7th, 2012)
Industrious
Nice to see you here again. Surreal, industrial and choppy with beautiful strings emerging at points. The "flying high" riff is a sample from a Jim Morrison song? Hope it gets developed.
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mahler24 said 2598 days ago (June 7th, 2012)
thanks guys and girls
for the interesting comments....very helpful. i will work on it abit more and put it up again.....one more question....does anyone think that the bass line is abit to much? do they go together? thanks for the help.b
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ramonaji said 2597 days ago (June 7th, 2012)
I like this
is that you singing? You sound like someone famous I can't put my finger on... is it Jim Morrison?
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mahler24 said 2597 days ago (June 8th, 2012)
yes!
its jim morrison.....well heard!
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michael2 said 2596 days ago (June 8th, 2012)
i love this
if i were to change anything it might be to slowly fade out the one gargly sounding synth (or actually maybe fade it in so that it's included in the tape stop section). it sort of takes over for awhile and there's some other cool stuff going on that get a little obscured by it. that string section could go on for a lot longer too, it's beautiful. you should milk it for all it's worth. like that record skip ending too, could also be longer. maybe a fade, or have the held string chord fade, just leaving the skipping sound. great track, verrry inpressed.
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Elevator_Funk said 2596 days ago (June 8th, 2012)
...
That vox bit that hit at about 1:40 sounded cool.
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mahler24 said 2594 days ago (June 11th, 2012)
thanks guys
maybe, you guys could quickly listen to the new version i just put up....its longer and more helpful comments would be appreciated.ty be
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