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A work-in-progress:
– This is a rough mix.
- The "ooh-ooh-ooh" is placeholder for the vocal melody.
- I would like to find a female singer to complete this song.
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Bring me up
lift me up to you
with your easy touch
words like wings
saying things
that give
life to dreams

The promise of years
with a good look
and live with a smile
were that all it took
You are a dream

Giving life
Giving hope
Feeling right
Feeling a smile
Who knows best, who knows me?
Feet on the ground and I'm wondering aloud

Walking down to the shore
Feel that breeze – it feels so alive with you.
Keeping warm, early morn and this makes my day

The promise of years
take a good look
and die with a smile
were that all it took
You are a dream
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Uploaded: Jun 16, 2012 - 07:29:36 AM
Last Updated: Jun 17, 2012 - 12:29:08 PM Last Played: Jun 24, 2019 - 11:20:55 AM
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gadzooks said 2565 days ago (June 16th, 2012)
A Dream
Nice feel to this. I like the gavel-ee groovin' walking bass and the panning of your guitar .. but I think if you get vocals in you'll want to push back the volume of the guitar.. Has a sultry feel to the tune ... I felt the orchestration could be pushed a little back in the mix when it first arrived ... like the piano ... lots of potential. Enjoyed
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VicDiesel said 2564 days ago (June 16th, 2012)
Very tasty guitar work. The synths sound cheap by comparison. I'd leave them out.
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lyzak said 2564 days ago (June 16th, 2012)
Good feeling
Enjoy all I'm hearing here. Will be especially interested to hear your lyrics (ohhhh! love that piano that drops in at 2:52!) put to female vocals!
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jfisenne said 2560 days ago (June 20th, 2012)
A Dream
I like the clean guitar and how you shifted between the left and right side balance. I'd like to hear this when you add the lyrics.
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DavidConnell said 2553 days ago (June 28th, 2012)
Thanks everyone for the feedback.
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dak said 2548 days ago (July 2nd, 2012)
A Dream
Like the walking bass
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