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One More Kiss with Cello


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DanBrownJr

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A sad tale of a life cut short...
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One More Kiss
Written, and Performed By: Dan Brown Jr

Verse 1

Well I got some news today
And I could tell he didn’t want to say
But I could see it O it wasn’t good

How could I in the prime of life
All of a sudden be outta time
I’d press rewind you know I would

Chorus

I won’t see my son grow up to the man I want to be
And I won’t see my baby granddaughter sit on my old knee
There are so many things that I just don’t wanna miss
But the one thing on the top of my list
Is One More Kiss

Verse 2

So I made avow today
A few things are gonna change
And I’ll start by a smile with no end

I gonna sell off some old things
Cause I don’t need them any way
And I’ll finally call some old friends

Chorus

And I won’t see my little princess on her wedding day
I won’t see my baby’s hair fade from dark brown to grey
There are so many things that I just don’t wanna miss
But the one thing on the top of my list
Is One More Kiss

Bridge

One more kiss for the first time
One more kiss from my wife
One more kiss a welcome home
When I’ve been gone so long

Verse 3

It looks like time has come
A lot of pain, and a lot of fun
So listen up, and please don’t forget

Teach your children, and love your wife
Choose your battles, Oh yes, win your fights
Enjoy the work, and make sure you sweat

Chorus

Now I’m off to walk between them shining pearly gates
Where my eyes will finally look upon my Maker’s face
I know one day you’ll be with me in eternal bliss
And the one thing that I can’t wait to get
Is One More Kiss

Bridge

One more kiss for the first time
One more kiss from my wife
One more kiss a welcome home
When I’ve been gone so long

One more kiss for the very first time
One more kiss from my beautiful wife
One more kiss a welcome home
When I’ve been gone so long
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Plays: 27
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Uploaded: Aug 21, 2012 - 03:08:50 PM
Last Updated: Aug 21, 2012 - 03:10:42 PM Last Played: May 17, 2019 - 05:37:57 AM
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Philip18 said 2490 days ago (August 21st, 2012)
Cello
I like the addition of the cello - adds extra warmth to the final section.
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egobandit said 2490 days ago (August 21st, 2012)
one more kiss
like the guitar playing, cool story telling, the phrasing in your singing is spot ont, some drums and bass would have been nice
thanks for sharing I enjoyed it
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Songwriterz said 2488 days ago (August 24th, 2012)
Now with cello ;)
As said, this is a very beautiful song and the cello adds the extra touch that makes it even more beautiful.. after having heard it a couple of times I think you could add more variations in the chorus to make it even more powerful.. I'd love to hear the line: "One more kiss a welcome home" where you go up instead of down like the rest of the lines.. I think that would lift your chorus a lot.. just a thought ;)
Also.. and this is just my oppinion.. I would love to hear this with less power in your voice.. I think that would make the lyrics stand out more.. but either way - you're very talented - congrats ;)
Love Heidi
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dave_b said 2485 days ago (August 26th, 2012)
One More Kiss with Cello
Strong melody, the vocal inflections are sounding very country, as is the acoustic guitar.
I think there is some story line that needs to be filled in. If the main character is with his wife, then one more kiss shouldn't be too difficult to come by. If he's living apart and the relationship is broken then tell us.
The lyrics about other family members feel genuine but don't serve that well to provide detail about the one more kiss relationship.
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