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Another song I found on an old harddrive . A sad point in life, but I'd like to share it.
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If I could see you, would it change anything or would I just stare on through?
As time passes, perception stays the same, as guilt leads the way.
Taking on different faces, reflecting filtered light.
Voices like thunder's call over cannon fire.
I hear direction to safer ground, but comfort comes as a hole in the earth, and my hands aren't yet tired. So I dig.
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Uploaded: Dec 10, 2012 - 04:18:53 AM
Last Updated: Dec 10, 2012 - 04:18:53 AM Last Played: Nov 01, 2018 - 12:37:32 AM
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jgurner said 2194 days ago (December 11th, 2012)
Nice
Sometimes looking back on the songs from a sad part of life can feel pretty good. I've done it on occasion myself. This is a really nice tune. I really like the lyrics. My only criticism is the vocals are a bit low in the mix. The words are worth hearing and the vocals are really good.

And I love the clarinets at the end. Nice touch.

Thanks for sharing.
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Les_Kloo said 2194 days ago (December 11th, 2012)
Hole
Well done. Good chord pattern, and your vocal delivery has sincerity. Nice arrangement, too.
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PeterB7858 said 2194 days ago (December 12th, 2012)
A hole in the earth
Another great "find", Daniel. The arrangement works very well and the angst vocals are just right. Some fine guitar work and an unusual chord structure give it an extra dimension, too. Quality post. Regards, Peter.
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Name: Daniel Moore
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