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I am currently writing a note about this particular section of posting a song (see my bio soon). While there has been request for song descriptions, I personally view this option as reduntant and even somewhat harmful in my art. I want my songs, or any other art to stay free and on their own. I am hoping this will not offend anyone, and that perhaps my posting under my bio will explain some more thoughts regarding this issue. Thanks/M
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[ father ]

father: there's a hole inside of me
you left me with a book
with pages that are dead
father: i would like to write us a story
but perhaps it is too late for that?

i don't know you
you don't know me
we don't know

who we are

father: you are inside of me wherever i am
father: are you running away because you can?

take my hand

father: i guess you must be getting old by now?
i can see your book without its words
father: do you have any idea of who we are?
i am wounded by the neglect

of your heart

© M 2005

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Uploaded: Mar 07, 2005 - 10:36:56 AM
Last Updated: Mar 07, 2005 - 10:03:31 AM Last Played: Nov 28, 2015 - 01:15:01 PM
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said 4757 days ago (March 8th, 2005)
Good production and interestng concept.
I'm wondering what this would sound like without the
child's Neil Young-like voice.
bronco said 4757 days ago (March 8th, 2005)
Good Writing
The lyrics work whether you are thinking of god or your
own father. When I have gotten into really serious
discussions with other guys, I have been amazed how
many say their fathers never really talked with them. I am
in the boomer generation so this would be WWII fathers.
Don't know if it has gotten any better. The religious
interpretation I will leave to those who are inclined in that
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Name: Mikki
Location: Brooklyn NY USA
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I was born and grew up in Finland, Scandinavia where I attended my first Art School followed by art studies in Sweden, and a noble fictional writing school. That was followed by an advertising and marketing degree. I am also a painter and I've had se... [see more]

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