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I've finished this song not long ago, but every time i listen back to it, it feels like something is missing, maybe im just over thinking the song and trying to do too much. What do you guys think, I'm a right thats it's missing something or is it OK the way it is?
I've also uploaded a unplugged version of the same song on sound cloud. I think I like the mellow version better. If you have time have a listen the the unplugged version and let me know your thoughts ....tx.
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Uploaded: Oct 21, 2013 - 01:37:36 PM
Last Updated: Oct 21, 2013 - 05:54:44 PM Last Played: Apr 25, 2019 - 10:55:36 PM
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sammydix said 2037 days ago (October 21st, 2013)
i think i hear what you mean. it's probably hard to pinpoint because the recording, the execution, and the vocals are all good.
but, at least for me, there was no "hook". nothing that really grabbed me in a strong way. and i reiterate--though nothing's technically "wrong" with the song. it sorta comes and goes. maybe some alternating bg vocals or similar?
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kwf said 2036 days ago (October 21st, 2013)
cool thanks...it's hard to look objectively at a song when you've been working on it for so long, I'll have to play with the arrangement and add a melody/ hook that might be more memorable...thanks mate
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Philip18 said 2036 days ago (October 21st, 2013)
Big backing supports the lyrics, although the vocal can get a little lost in it (especially towards the end). I like the solo sections using the two guitars. I'm impressed by the musicianship and like the arrangement. Good one!
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Les_Kloo said 2036 days ago (October 21st, 2013)
I like your vocals. Maybe it's just me but the guitars sound a bit muffled. Could just be that my headphone ear are shot from too much music lately. Compositionally, nothing sticks out like a sore thumb. Talk to SammyD. Seems fine to me. You always have good ideas, and this is no exception. Keep rocking.
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faultysynapse said 2032 days ago (October 25th, 2013)
I liked te guitar i the intro,but the song need contasts.some sort of dynamics vocally.I couldnt tell where the verse ended and the chorus begain i kept wanting to feel a release.Having said that i like your tone and the mix.
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