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jobu

 Genre: Pop (Alternative)

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Tried to write a song using just two chords. Almost succeeded, but added more chords for a solo section at the last minute. Needed it. Thanks for listening.
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Uploaded: Nov 25, 2017 - 08:39:12 PM
Last Updated: Nov 25, 2017 - 08:39:12 PM Last Played: Nov 22, 2018 - 11:19:54 AM
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Calchas said 381 days ago (November 29th, 2017)
Nice mellow mood herein...
Well sung man... Vocal could have been just a tad forward in the mix, but all in all a really nice tune.

Be well friend!
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jobu said 374 days ago (December 6th, 2017)
Yep
I'm definitely going to fix that for the record. Thanks for the tip.
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b0rn2w0rsh1p said 368 days ago (December 12th, 2017)
I like the Electric Piano...
but it over-modulated my headphones a bit - granted not studio phones, just a warning that there are a lot of overtones in those tines. Otherwise, very cool...
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Daugrin said 274 days ago (March 16th, 2018)
Two Chords Wonder
This one moves closer to Nilsson that your previous. That is great. If this is indeed a demo perhaps some production suggestions are appropriate?
Include more top end eq on the main vocal via a buss and excite the overtones. Just a bit now. Placing close harmony on the main vocal on important words might increase the sense of drama.
The drum machine sound is cliche. You can alter this flavor easily. My suggestion would be to add a buss and pitch the results 12 tones lower. This will be a reverb in a sense, dial in just enough to add depth to the digital sounding samples.
There is an effective synth hook which suffers the same cliche voicing issue. Again easy to address this issue.
One more? Add a bit more reverb on the master so we can hear the room your in. Support the mids and lower mids with some compression on the master.
Thank you for posting. The quality of your work deserves more support here.

Daug
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