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An Important Step 2


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steveg

 Genre: Indie Rock
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Reworked with some vocals, guitar and piano
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Lyrics
It's just for you
Song Stats
Hits: 184
Comments: 4
Fans: 3
Plays: 21
Downloads: 5
Votes: 0
Uploaded: Jan 22, 2019 - 08:16:13 AM
Last Updated: Jan 22, 2019 - 08:16:13 AM Last Played: Apr 14, 2019 - 06:08:32 AM
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Hardware:
Strat, Alesis Midi
Software:
Logic Pro
Comments
charlieknight said 90 days ago (January 22nd, 2019)
good work
very nice piece,

Bob Dylans advice on writing songs was to sing as loud as you can, whatever comes into your mind again and again until something comes out of it. sing without fear.
backing vocals are great but you sound shy about your voice you shouldn't be.

having said that, the hesitant youthful voice in the left ear does have a certain charm! if that was what you were after of course please disregard the above!
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scottghorwath said 89 days ago (January 23rd, 2019)
micks
tears for fears i am thinking of - good dreams here - making something that leaves its signature consisting of only ingredients you like most
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Daugrin said 89 days ago (January 23rd, 2019)
Step 2
Well it a bit more commercial. How about the better backgrounds? That was well thought out and rendered in fine style, Air blend them some more!
Still want to tweak? Let the bass line drive the track until the vocal blends. I like the bass tone, might need more human touch? To get that buss the bass and add a pitch shift an octave below. Clean up the buss with eq and excite the results. To this bass sauce add drive and let the listener feel the line on their skin. This makes a huge difference on a track.
The lead vocal needs to auto tune. Why? The singer does not have breath control. Think about a pipe with air blowing through, like a horn or kazoo The more air pushed through the pipe the higher the pitch. Listen to the lead vocal push air through as the ends of his lines happen. The pitch goes up. If you don't want to auto tune yer gonna have to work to get better control of pitch. Listen to singers who have yer type of voice and take pointers...

Daug
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DWL said 84 days ago (January 29th, 2019)
They're right
Don't be shy about the vocals. All very nicely put together.

Cheers

Dick
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Name: Steve G
Location: Rural Norfolk ENGLAND
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Been a MAC addict for years!! Thank you for any comments, I do not tend to reply but do read and appreciate your time to comment etc. Using Logic Pro X and finally getting to grips with the software. Guitars: Axe bass Les Paul Fender Str... [see more]

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