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A song about a cry for help & no one really listening.

I wrote this whilst suffering from clinical depression, I was severely disillusioned with everything including music! I decided to kill off my pseudonym AbstractVision & stop writing, singing & recording. After a long hard struggle with maintaining normal life & a few good people around me I started to re-join the human race, I was then encouraged by some other musicians to write again. So I re-invented myself as Alien8ed (which seemed an appropriate name as that is how I felt). Eventually I started to write again, usually with my dark experiences as an influence, quite a few songs were born out of that time & weirdly enough were quite good.
Nowadays everything is so different & my writing has done a 360* turn, much much happier.

I would like to thank Kevin (PinkFreud) for the opportunity to add my Lyrics & Voice to his astonishingly amazing track & the listen out for the blistering guitar about half way through.

A VIDEO TO THIS TRACK CAN BE FOUND HERE:

UNDONE by AbstractVision & PinkFreud from Abstractvision on Vimeo.

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AbstractVision & PinkFreud

UNDONE
Music/Kevin Cosley©2010
Lyrics/Vocals By Billy Attwell©2010

I’ve learnt some things
About myself
Now the day is done
When all around have kept their heads
Mine’s been in the clouds
Now I’m undone

When all around have kept their heads
Mine’s been in the clouds
Now I’m undone
I’ve come undone

I’ve come undone
I’ve come undone

I’ve always been the joker
I’ve always played the fool
Genetically wired up so wrong
I swim in a different pool
Alone inside the crowd
So different from the rest
I’ve walked the line of madness
I think it’s for the best
I’ve come undone
I’ve come undone

But do you see......me?...... do you finally understand?
I need a helping hand.......coz I’m undone
& can you finally feel...... something for me now
That I’m undone?

Counting hairs on the back of my hand
I live inside this hell
Boxed inside my own mind
Within this padded cell
I’m so undone
I’m so undone

Counting hairs on the back of my hand
I live inside this hell
Locked inside my own mind
Within this padded cell
I can come undone.

A VIDEO TO THIS TRACK CAN BE FOUND HERE:

UNDONE by AbstractVision & PinkFreud from Abstractvision on Vimeo.

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Comments: 6
Fans: 2
Plays: 11
Downloads: 57
Votes: 0
Uploaded: Aug 31, 2019 - 08:01:08 PM
Last Updated: Sep 03, 2019 - 04:05:40 PM Last Played: Sep 15, 2019 - 04:03:01 PM
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jibes said 15 days ago (September 1st, 2019)
Nice work!
Great lyrics to a great track!
Check out my latest song called Raining in my heart
AbstractVision said 13 days ago (September 4th, 2019)
Thnx
For the comment & the listen, much appreciated.
Check out my latest song called Changes
KCsGROOVE said 13 days ago (September 4th, 2019)
undone
Didn't know you were going through dark times, but good to hear things have gotten better
A strong personal song
Music is a healer
good one, Bill
KC
Check out my latest song called WORK
AbstractVision said 13 days ago (September 4th, 2019)
Thnx for the comment & listen Cees
Yeah I used to hide it well eh! Unfortunately my choice of medication didn’t help! (Red Wine & Irish Whiskey) gave me bursts of highs, happiness & humour but the coming down was horrendous. Finally escaped my heavy chains with the love of a fantastic woman.
Check out my latest song called Changes
Dadai.2 said 11 days ago (September 5th, 2019)
A man and his guitar...
(and his band) unpacking his stuff, his struggles as he looks into the mirror, with honesty. Solid writing. Really good one.
Check out my latest song called Into The Down...
AbstractVision said 11 days ago (September 5th, 2019)
Prolific words
Thnx for stopping by for a listen & the comment.
Check out my latest song called Changes
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Name: Alien8ed
Location: Lancing West Sussex UK
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✍ 🎤 🎧 I 💗 MUSIC I am Will a.k.a. William, Billy, AbstractVision or Alien8ed. I am nearly 59 Years young (& yes my picture is a recent one!), my partner is the most beautiful, loving, thoughtful, caring, sexies... [see more]

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