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Complex Simplicity


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Loob

 Genre: Rock

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This is still an "in process" track, but I feel it's worth sharing what has developed since I posted it here last. Jeff has inserted a great guitar solo/bridge, and wrote and sung some lyrics/vocals. I told him I thought the low parts he's singing is at the bottom of his range, and it's weaker than the rest of the vocals because of that. He agreed, but said he thinks if he gives it full voice he can do better on the low vocal parts. I guess that means he will try to sing from the diaphram. Not finished yet, but worth a listen. We are talking about backing vocals as well. On the middle part that jeff inserted he is doing all part (drums, bass, keys, guitars), otherwise here are the credits:

jzsuperstar author, lyrics, melody, vocal, all parts on bridge !
ivax guitar
Ernie440 bass
mrrockero keys
Keeper drums !
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Lyrics
You've got a life worth mending
No point in condemning
Mistakes that happened in the past

Thats no way to fix a problem
Can't pick up what has fallen
Just leave it be and breath at last

You make it so much harder
Sit back and think things over
Calm down, look ahead and pray

There's not a destination
No place that holds salvation
What you need is not so far away

If you could just turn your eyes my way
Remove your head from the sand
We find its not all that complex
When we strive to see in simplicity

Oh yeah, here are the rest of the lyrics...

I get that you want to be
Someone who is specialy
Gifted and way before the time

You 've got your gold but then there's silver
No matter which is delivered
We can see how both of these can shine

Sometimes it's required
Hard work to inspire
A magnatude of critical acclaim

But in the end if you get it
Make sure sure there is no regret
After all its all done in your name

If you could just turn your eyes my way
Remove your head from the sand
We find its not all that complex
When we look to see in simplicity
© JZsuperstar
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Uploaded: Oct 02, 2019 - 10:03:04 AM
Last Updated: Oct 02, 2019 - 10:03:04 AM Last Played: Oct 15, 2019 - 02:43:16 AM
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Skean said 13 days ago (October 3rd, 2019)
Complex Simplicity
Sounds great so far, I like it a lot, cheers.
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KCsGROOVE said 12 days ago (October 3rd, 2019)
cool mix
I really like the mix , especially drums and bass.
Cool songwriting!
enjoyed
KC
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Daugrin said 12 days ago (October 3rd, 2019)
Existential Angst again
This bag is full. Tom Waits or Morrison maybe Zappa... the Cat is at the bottom of his range, it is difficult to sell lyrics that are not humorous in the lower mids. The music is great and deserves a different lyric.
So my challenge is to create a linear story that says the same thing as all the idea words and cliche phrases being worked here.
Put your ideas into things. For example we say, "I love you." Girl is not impressed. We send roses and meaning is in the flowers, a guy might be more successful. What vehicle would hold the ideas here effectively?

Daug
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Calchas said 7 days ago (October 8th, 2019)
Progress!
Track sounds pretty far along. Really like the leads and the keys...
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